Love like candy.

You gave love like candy to a child,
and dragged laughter from my belly.
Your voice filled my thoughts and mind,
leaving no space in the between times.

I wonder,at the complete invasion!
to death-like quiet..and..
our all or nothing view of love.
I breathe deeply of the silence.

If I fight to understand,
I'll watch it fly out of reach.
Associating things with you,
that pull at my heart.

I breathe deeply of the silence,
and like an old familiar quilt,
drawn close on a cold winter night,
let the peace settle over me.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jun 2010

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Comments (16)

trurorob
melancholic, but very nice read!
rob
tomboygirl
Thanks Rob..
Ladyjj
A lovely touching poem tomboygirl.. "I breath deeply of the silence" is so well versed..we all can relate to..and understand.

Thank you for sharing.. wave

Ljj
agoodguy2have
your best effort in my opinion. great and yes, melancholic. ;-]
tomboygirl
Thankyou for reading ladyjj,and for relatingteddybear

agoodguy,thankyou and why's this my greatest effort?pls some feed back?xxx
andrew149
Truth in verse, in my humble opinion, Thankyou Tomboygirl.......Andrew......xxx
tomboygirl
Feelings of the moment Andrew,thanks for reading.teddybear
kyriacos2009
Very nice write Tomboygirl...improving with each one that comesalong...K
Ladybee42
coola boola hun..and really lovely new pic..applause applause
masterg
Truly beautiful and may you be at peace.
tomboygirl
Thankyou kyriakos,thats good to know!

last years pic Ladyb,but thanksteddybear
tomboygirl
masterg-glad you think so Ian.
jazzy75
tomboygirl - some of my favorite things all rolled up into one - one amazing poem! thanks my friend for posting!gift
tomboygirl
Thankyou jazzyhun.x hug
paloma66
Beautiful! I loved the last stanza,Nice write.hug bouquet
tomboygirl
Thanks for the support Palomahug
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