by gardenhackleStratford, Connecticut, USA
Aug 2010 406 Views 8 comments
Slow Torture
Slowly, every so slowly.
Moving slightly then stopping.
Then again and moans escape.
God, it's sooooo long and hard.
Yes... Oh yes, it'll make you crazy.
Oh... Oh God it's so hot!
Squirming, moving around
Head turning right and left
Roaring in the ears
The pace quickens
Slowing down again...
Not yet... no, not yet.
Not fast, not hurried
Such slow torture
Nerves fired up
Ready to explode
Yeah, well up yours, pal.
Bastage cut me off.
Rush hour commute on I-95 in summer.
Moving slightly then stopping.
Then again and moans escape.
God, it's sooooo long and hard.
Yes... Oh yes, it'll make you crazy.
Oh... Oh God it's so hot!
Squirming, moving around
Head turning right and left
Roaring in the ears
The pace quickens
Slowing down again...
Not yet... no, not yet.
Not fast, not hurried
Such slow torture
Nerves fired up
Ready to explode
Yeah, well up yours, pal.
Bastage cut me off.
Rush hour commute on I-95 in summer.
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Posted: Aug 2010
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Comments (8)
So provocative, only to end up on I-95
Brilliantly choreographed gardenhackle! Wasn't expecting that ending at all.
I'm so feelin' your pain
If you wrote a book
I admit I know nothing of 1-95? (Highway/tube?) but do understand the frustrations of rush hour!
A great twist to your poem..
Ljj
Shall we take the country route next...LOL
Neat write
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