Unfaithful

by lovecanberealSydney, New South Wales, Australia

Dec 2016 754 Views 15 comments

Unfaithful

He tries to kiss away her tears
That flow like rivulets of melted lead
To her pillow.

Inconsolable the salty flood
Courses wetly down the
Anguished aspect of her face -
As she cries out her sorrow.

For he has been unfaithful
(She knows it, though she hasn't proof).
She shoves him rudely away
To sleep in a separate bed;-
And they will part tomorrow.

© lovecanbereal
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Posted: Dec 2016

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Comments (15)

cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USADec 9, 2016

Most beautiful poem my friend. You really are
a passionate writer and you have phenomenal
insight.
Cafe

lovecanberealOPSydney, New South Wales AustraliaDec 9, 2016

Thanks Cafe. I guess the more we write, the more we improve??? - yeah well hopefully.

online today!

godsprincessOwego, New York USADec 9, 2016

Good for her!

Kathy

doglover14hudson, New York USADec 9, 2016

If only people were smart enough to stop for a moment and weigh the consciquences of their actions ~ BEFORE THEY DO THEM!

Heartfelt words you have written!

Mady

lovecanberealOPSydney, New South Wales AustraliaDec 10, 2016

Of course this unfaithfulness may work both ways. Thanks for the comments

lovecanberealOPSydney, New South Wales AustraliaApr 29, 2017

Thanks BU46...

RedexNorthumberland, England UKMay 7, 2017

A brilliant observation of a strong women they usually linger for another go of his that is.

enjoyed of course reading

lovecanberealOPSydney, New South Wales AustraliaMay 7, 2017

Thanks for the comment Redex...

BentleeSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaMay 7, 2017

I've never understood this madness that people can have at times. Not only is it a dagger to the soul of the one betrayed, but it becomes a vicious triad for the purpose of what.

I have always believed that what begins in a lie will also end with that same kind of lie.

Nicely done and short to point.