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Blown AWAY guys thumbs up wow can't wait to see what happens next!!!!
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Currently trying to clear rainwater out of flooded hallway, bear with.
the love interest could enter now .... grin

okay he pongs a bit, but only on one side rolling on the floor laughing
Toner, you can add your comment again here if you feel it bears repeating, but the other blog is just for the story, sorry.
The plot thickens ... applause shutting up now to let other writers in, only posting this comment to keep the 2 blogs near each other
Lee - yay, happy to have the alternative storyline, this one getting a bit dark, laugh but all non-story comments on this blog please, I've deleted your comment
I do not know why the hallway is flooded? could be someone left the door open or it might take place during a hurricane.
I like a bit of comedy in a story, lots of twists and funny cliff hangerswink
He needs a love interest and she will blow his mindgrin
I think so - once they get rid of that worrying shadow lurking nearby.

Or Cach has added a new twist ... 3 threads that can be followed now laugh
rolling on the floor laughing Pick your story from a storyrolling on the floor laughing
Reminder, anyone leaving the main storyline to follow one of the two alternatives - Al switching to cricketing fame and fortune, or the girl in the cape wondering what happened - really would help if you copy and paste the comment you are exploring before you add your own? Although I think boggled minds are inevitable soon laugh
...I will have to wait for my story line to evolve further and maybe his love interest will bedazzle himgrin
I like your idea of writing stories and it feeds people's imaginationshandshake
My imagination right now feels DOA so I am absolutely loving the twists and tweaks introduced laugh especially the challenge of pulling back to the original storyline - such as it is! yay
Ah jeez Biff. doh
I can only deal with realities, even if they are fictional realities laugh
It's died the death now anyway, Molly, I can't even wrap it up as I made the last comment laugh
Okay, I'll try to comment, and let you do the wrap grin
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