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Apr 8, 2017 3:42 AM CST Any else write songs?
Rustymc64
Rustymc64Rustymc64Branchland, West Virginia USA6 Threads 37 Posts
verse 1 . So Show me u feel more than only a need to.be wit sum body,& now its just me. Show me a reason,i should believe you.piont it out so clear, a blind man can see. I watch the actions know most the meanin but at times its easy to fool those like me.
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Apr 8, 2017 3:51 AM CST Any else write songs?
Rustymc64
Rustymc64Rustymc64Branchland, West Virginia USA6 Threads 37 Posts
#2 .So i ask you plainly,to show me devotiion & make me believe it is what i see. Hopin your anwsers are the ones im wantn.Dying to know if its sum game you play.watchn ur body as you moving closer im beggin the heaven to hav u want 2 stay.
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Apr 8, 2017 3:55 AM CST Any else write songs?
Rustymc64
Rustymc64Rustymc64Branchland, West Virginia USA6 Threads 37 Posts
btw i cant upload a pic so i mailed 1 today. . wonder who reads forums?
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Apr 8, 2017 4:27 AM CST Any else write songs?
Grumpywriter
GrumpywriterGrumpywriterTbilisi, Georgia18 Threads 1 Polls 702 Posts
I was in a band 30 years ago (bassist) and we wrote gazillions of verses and snippets of choruses etc. But only managed a handful of 'complete' numbers.

I still have them saved :))))
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Apr 8, 2017 4:33 AM CST Any else write songs?
mollybaby
mollybabymollybabyCork City, Cork Ireland56 Threads 8 Polls 23,608 Posts
Rustymc64: #2 .So i ask you plainly,to show me devotiion & make me believe it is what i see. Hopin your anwsers are the ones im wantn.Dying to know if its sum game you play.watchn ur body as you moving closer im beggin the heaven to hav u want 2 stay.


Sum games are wort playiing
Dey learn u deviding and addiing
Dat helps wit brake ups and babies
Dunno though if it helps win de ladyes
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Apr 8, 2017 5:06 AM CST Any else write songs?
Grumpywriter
GrumpywriterGrumpywriterTbilisi, Georgia18 Threads 1 Polls 702 Posts
mollybaby: Sum games are wort playiing
Dey learn u deviding and addiing
Dat helps wit brake ups and babies
Dunno though if it helps win de ladyes


Here's one I wrote from the 80's (chords removed - lol)
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Apr 8, 2017 5:07 AM CST Any else write songs?
mollybaby
mollybabymollybabyCork City, Cork Ireland56 Threads 8 Polls 23,608 Posts
Grumpywriter: Here's one I wrote from the 80's (chords removed - lol)


I kinna open it, luv
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Apr 8, 2017 5:13 AM CST Any else write songs?
Grumpywriter
GrumpywriterGrumpywriterTbilisi, Georgia18 Threads 1 Polls 702 Posts
mollybaby: I kinna open it, luv


paste it.....? confused dunno
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Apr 8, 2017 5:16 AM CST Any else write songs?
mollybaby
mollybabymollybabyCork City, Cork Ireland56 Threads 8 Polls 23,608 Posts
Grumpywriter: paste it.....?


Paste it yourself snooty
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Apr 8, 2017 5:18 AM CST Any else write songs?
Grumpywriter
GrumpywriterGrumpywriterTbilisi, Georgia18 Threads 1 Polls 702 Posts
mollybaby: Paste it yourself


I did - It works tongue
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Apr 8, 2017 5:24 AM CST Any else write songs?
I write mostly music to the song. I did write a few songs years ago but was never that good (except for one that I wrote about the Afghan war but lost it over the years).
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Apr 8, 2017 5:28 AM CST Any else write songs?
BritishLondon
BritishLondonBritishLondonManchester, Greater Manchester, England UK323 Posts
Two songs which I can only remember the chorus to, and these were:

"I gotta lose weight" to the tune of Faith by George Michael
&
"like a gaylord" to the tune of Like A Virgin by Madonna.
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Apr 8, 2017 5:40 AM CST Any else write songs?
sophiasummer
sophiasummersophiasummerNorthland, New Zealand112 Threads 6,528 Posts
Rustymc64: verse 1 . So Show me u feel more than only a need to.be wit sum body,& now its just me. Show me a reason,i should believe you.piont it out so clear, a blind man can see. I watch the actions know most the meanin but at times its easy to fool those like me.
v

Verse 1.

Really?
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Apr 8, 2017 5:45 AM CST Any else write songs?
sophiasummer
sophiasummersophiasummerNorthland, New Zealand112 Threads 6,528 Posts
dancing applause tongue rolling on the floor laughing professor
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Apr 8, 2017 5:56 AM CST Any else write songs?
sophiasummer
sophiasummersophiasummerNorthland, New Zealand112 Threads 6,528 Posts
Track16: I write mostly music to the song. I did write a few songs years ago but was never that good (except for one that I wrote about the Afghan war but lost it over the years).


You are so cool.!

Soph
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Apr 8, 2017 10:07 AM CST Any else write songs?
I only sing songs from The Bible.

This song has a deceptively happy beat while he prays for something he'd be better off without...


"In the twighlight, in the evening, in the dark and black night, I met Delilah, she kissed me.

I love Delilah, father get her for me.

Father I love Delilah, I pray thee get her for me."



There's a lot more to it.

He ends up with the woman of he prayed for, cheated and fooled by all kinds of men for trusting the wrong woman, his hair cut off by a strange man while he slept peacefully on her lap, having his eyes blinded, tormented in misery: and at the end, only praying to be avenged for his blind eyes.
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Apr 8, 2017 3:25 PM CST Any else write songs?
Rustymc64
Rustymc64Rustymc64Branchland, West Virginia USA6 Threads 37 Posts
Its written badly cause i get lazy.That song was from the 80s. i play it now n then.forgot some the lines. Btw nice to see the replies to this post. Music is stuck in our heads right now!..
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Jun 18, 2017 1:57 AM CST Any else write songs?
Rustymc64
Rustymc64Rustymc64Branchland, West Virginia USA6 Threads 37 Posts
When its over, its over.aint no goin back to change your mind.If its goin on,its goin on.even if it crosses the line.When the nites fall,you hear the call.of the wild its got your name. makes you wonder, bout the thunder.why lightning never is the same
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Jun 18, 2017 1:57 PM CST Any else write songs?
sergio09
sergio09sergio09Knoxville, Tennessee USA31 Threads 901 Posts
Been writing songs and poems since i was a child. I have one poem in the poems section.

One song: Someday I'll find someone who is good to me.
Someone who won't treat me bad
I'll look from hill and dale, and to the sea.
I'll search and search til I'm mad.

This time I must be sure she loves me
I must be no one's fool again
Someday I'll find someone who's good to me
AND BREAK HER HEART IN REVENGE.

Written when i was 15
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Jun 18, 2017 2:14 PM CST Any else write songs?
I write songs......give me any name, and i.ll write a song........professor
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