the fulcrum may be the bow of Cupid so great is our self held pride
Dave Your poem, so wonderfully webbed, your an amazing poet! Sophia
EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusSep 6, 2010
Very perceptive and strongly evocative and revealing of human nature which has lost faith in itself..., innured by years of unhealed trauma..., thanks Goodguy...
NeverEndingStoryChesterfield, Derbyshire, England UKSep 6, 2010
Good one. It's called being hurt. What doesn't kill you makes you stranger
beautifulyouNew York, USASep 6, 2010
Ty for sharing your insights GG.
Maybe one day there will be less Seesaw and a little more Yin Yang ...
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKSep 7, 2010
Incredible piece, really, stunning poetry and philosophy. Philosopoetry? I don't know why; perhaps because it usually is not a true soul mate, we are really looking for ourselves, because of the ego? A note from the editor would be helpful.
Scholar_GypsyKermanshah, IranSep 8, 2010
Dear Good Guy, you well know what love and its games are! Don't complain! You too come with me and let's get drunk!
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so great is our self held pride
Dave
Your poem, so wonderfully webbed, your an amazing poet!
Sophia
Maybe one day there will be less Seesaw and a little more Yin Yang ...
A note from the editor would be helpful.