Longing

Pretty, sweet and patient as the morning sun

She smiles and laughs hiding her inner longing

As she portrays herself as needing no one

She skillfully rejects the thoughts of belonging

Her cheerful nature belies the wanting within

She needs someone to make her totaly complete

Yet hiding behind a wall of mirrors once again

The armoured walls allow her to be discrete

She needs a matching spirit tender and serene

To touch her kindly heart and make her realize

She is such a unique and prescious being

Worthy of the gaze of only true patient eyes
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Posted: Nov 2010
About this poem:
We often try to hide the fact
that we really need someone.

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empyrean
"she needs a matching spirit tender and serene"
you just read her great! bouquet
jeddah12
To touch her kindly heart and make her realize

She is such a unique and prescious being

Worthy of the gaze of only true patient eyes

how could i miss this poem,,very well versed and beautiful poem sir,thanks for sharingcheers
boyshchrm6
Thanks for your comment Empyrean. Appreciate it.
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QuietStormF
You are such a romantic.. sigh teddybear bouquet
gnj4u
Hi, boyshchrm6,
Nice to see you back in the Corner! Paraphrasing something I have heard... "We need others and others are in need of us" may be true, but to find a matching spirit tender and serene, ah, what bliss!
Ladybee42
nice one boyschrm6 bouquet bouquet
boyshchrm6
Thanks so much Jeddah12.
andrew149
Good to see you again my friend......nice poem....Andrew...cool
hedistuff
so very nice boysh...
boyshchrm6
Yes QS I am a Romantic...and a
Rennaissance man also...lol.angel sad flower
Happygolucky4u
I found this to be so beautiful and sensual. teddybear
boyshchrm6
thanks gnj4u. Glad you liked it.
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boyshchrm6
thanks for your comment LadyBee42
Appreciated.angel
boyshchrm6
Thanks so much for your kind
comment Niah2. Love your poetryangel wave
helios1
I love this poem!!! Am I inlove with the poet, too??? confused
paloma66
How nice to see you back and with a beautiful,Longing poem.Loved this.Grand re-entry!!!!!!thumbs up handshake teddybear bouquet
boyshchrm6
Thanks Andrew. Nice to be
back. devil angel beer beer
jazzy75
boyshchrm - missed you my friend! glad to see you are back writing....and with such a tender poem. beautifully done!
boyshchrm6
Thanks for the nice comment
Hedistuffangel wine cheers
boyshchrm6
Thanks Happygolucky4U. Appreciate your
comment and response.grin angel grin hug
magykmir
Terrific!
boyshchrm6
Thanks Helios.I guess my poem had an impact.
I am but mortal...lol.angel comfort wine
boyshchrm6
Thanks for your kind comment Paloma.angel hug
boyshchrm6
Thanks Jazzy. You missed me...but only
by inches...lol. Missed you too. Good
to be back. Thanks.angel hug peace snowglobe
boyshchrm6
Thanks magykmir. So very glad you
enjoyed it. Tahangel cheers
trurorob
fine poem my friend!
rob
Chrone
i cannot stop read it! cheers
moonontide
You portray her transperancy beautifully.
Loved reading this.::balloonsu:
boyshchrm6
Thanks Rob. I truly appreciate such
a comment from a master. TY angel handshake cheers
Earlgreytea
Truer words were never spoken, Canada, nice to finally see your face friend, you look pretty formidable, lol laugh
boyshchrm6
Thanks for your comment Chrone.
You have always been too kind.angel cool
boyshchrm6
Thanks so much for your comments Moonontide
Transparent but perhaps under frosted glass...lol.

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QuietStormF
Another amazing write... from an amazing poet... Kudos! Love readng from your sensitive side..teddybear wine bouquet
daciana1
One of my favorite! I'm still reading it...blues Thank you, Boyshchrm! handshake Btw, how may I spell your user name? roll eyes No importa, as a friend of mine told, the character is important not the name! hug
boyshchrm6
Not sensitive enough QS. Sometimes takes me
forever to get the message.
angel cool
boyshchrm6
Your words were way too kind Carol Joyce.
I immensely enjoy your poetry. ty for commenting.
cool angel hug hug teddybear angel bouquet
boyshchrm6
thanks Earlgreytea. I have since
trimmed my Fomidable beard...lol.
Thanks for your comment.angel cool grin cheers
Odette67
This poem is just beautiful. heart beating teddybear
country_lady67
wow... That could very well have been me.. lol I try and hide behind a belief Im strong and independent and need no one yet I long to be held..
boyshchrm6
Thanks Rob. Always nice to
get a comment from a Master.
cool angel cheers
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