falling down

can the single domino step out of line
and break the chain of disasters remain
to stop the predicted event of decline
or are we all end-to-end our own bane

two dominos together whether side-by-side
or end-to-end can easily tumble and collide
a house divided, just as a long domino line
may cascade and descend to face supine

this domino theory of certain doomed end
could be broken mid-line but might depend
on a single person of well pointed face
to find deep courage and step out of place

say stop the incessant rant of displeasure
view all souls with a different stick of measure
that all might have worth in someone's eyes
can be for offended a new found surprise

we all as individuals, group, nation, a race
can treat as we want to be treated in turn
and stop throwing stones to others debase
could be the lesson we are all here to learn

© agoodguy2have 2010-11-27
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Posted: Nov 2010
About this poem:
yet i sooo love to set 'em up...'n watch 'em fall.

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cafetwo2010
Really great poem goodguy'. It's that ellusive 'single person, stepping out of his place that's needed.' I guess you could call him 'The Domino Man.' cafe wine
hedistuff
is this about bowling? which pin is missing? it matters! brilliant goodguy...
niah9
Oh goodguy2have.....I agree, I love those nice little patterns, so tidy, yet one misplaced...and......THE END...but I see the other too...
Niahwow teddybear
caroljoyce
I am struggling here to connect a theory of possible communist takeover with the spiritual one, of the necessity of acceptance for peace and happiness.
As for the first, I would love a communist takeover as I have always been one (minus the bribes).I double this is what you mean, I suspect this is related to snowball and butterfly theories, a small change can produce profound effect. Well yes! Thought provoking !
CJprofessor
boyshchrm6
Good stuff. Yes it takes a special
person to take a stand and not follow the
crowd. We are all individuals and should
act accordingly.angel heart wings peace
stillframe
very nice my friend
Ladybee42
I think you've addled CJ's brain....please don't do this as she may step out of line by accident and woosh!....she would be then the Domino Lady...interesting and thought provoking poem GG, i'll write it down...writing thumbs up bouquet bouquet
gardenhackle
For evil to triumph, it takes only for good men to do nothing. The right action at the right time by those who care to make a positive change can break the chain of events... or at least I do believe so. Great write! wine
caroljoyce
Oh I meant I DOUBT that is what you mean, not double, unless it's Freudian. LB is right, brain addled, body all aching and racked with pain, soul gone.
JC
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