can the single domino step out of line and break the chain of disasters remain to stop the predicted event of decline or are we all end-to-end our own bane
two dominos together whether side-by-side or end-to-end can easily tumble and collide a house divided, just as a long domino line may cascade and descend to face supine
this domino theory of certain doomed end could be broken mid-line but might depend on a single person of well pointed face to find deep courage and step out of place
say stop the incessant rant of displeasure view all souls with a different stick of measure that all might have worth in someone's eyes can be for offended a new found surprise
we all as individuals, group, nation, a race can treat as we want to be treated in turn and stop throwing stones to others debase could be the lesson we are all here to learn
cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USANov 27, 2010
Really great poem goodguy'. It's that ellusive 'single person, stepping out of his place that's needed.' I guess you could call him 'The Domino Man.' cafe
is this about bowling? which pin is missing? it matters! brilliant goodguy...
niah9Auckland, New ZealandNov 27, 2010
Oh goodguy2have.....I agree, I love those nice little patterns, so tidy, yet one misplaced...and......THE END...but I see the other too... Niah
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKNov 28, 2010
I am struggling here to connect a theory of possible communist takeover with the spiritual one, of the necessity of acceptance for peace and happiness. As for the first, I would love a communist takeover as I have always been one (minus the bribes).I double this is what you mean, I suspect this is related to snowball and butterfly theories, a small change can produce profound effect. Well yes! Thought provoking ! CJ
I think you've addled CJ's brain....please don't do this as she may step out of line by accident and woosh!....she would be then the Domino Lady...interesting and thought provoking poem GG, i'll write it down...
For evil to triumph, it takes only for good men to do nothing. The right action at the right time by those who care to make a positive change can break the chain of events... or at least I do believe so. Great write!
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKNov 28, 2010
Oh I meant I DOUBT that is what you mean, not double, unless it's Freudian. LB is right, brain addled, body all aching and racked with pain, soul gone. JC
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Niah
As for the first, I would love a communist takeover as I have always been one (minus the bribes).I double this is what you mean, I suspect this is related to snowball and butterfly theories, a small change can produce profound effect. Well yes! Thought provoking !
CJ
person to take a stand and not follow the
crowd. We are all individuals and should
act accordingly.
JC