Unfinished Love

Friends or not
You keep on missing me
Breath you in
Then I breath you out
Cuz you were not
Meant to be

A story with no clear endin'
You're still wonderin
If I'll Give in !!

Unfinished Love ..
Keeps on Calling me
And I should answer the call
It's Clear That I ..
Moved on ..
And between us I'll build a Wall ..
Unfinished Love ..
You're everything I don't want !
Don't you call me at all ..!!
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Posted: Nov 2010
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It's Over !!

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Comments (10)

elo777
I love it Swan it captures much and yet remains simple and pure
Swan87
Thanx Dear Elo .. So Kind of you ..
Im tryin' my best to improve my writing ..conversing

Swan
Ladybee42
good for you - you moved on! cool write swan
bouquet bouquet
mike7375
This is good, love the 'Don't you call me at all part'wave
Swan87
Sweet Ladybee hug Thanx a million

Swan
Swan87
Kind Of you Mike ..Thanx for Reading kiss

Swan
niah9online now!
Like the breath you in then I breath you out....neat phrase...
Great write....Niahapplause applause
Swan87
Thanx alot Niah cheers Cheers Gurl teddybear

Swan
Happygolucky4u
"And between us I'll build a Wall." Awww the wall. I have built a few for different reasons in life. I build mine with very strong material where I can feel comfortable behind them laugh I enjoyed your poem. I loved the ending. Now go and enjoy life and don't look back.bouquet
Swan87
Hey HappyGoLucky !! Thanks a million for reading it ..Thanks for your time ..
I am on the way of getting over him now hug processing to heal up !

Swan
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