Love unconditional

by marikiaTbilisi, Georgia

Jan 2011 683 Views 5 comments

Love unconditional

I am the one who cares,
I am the one who asks,
I am the one who tells you,
Oh, dear, I love you so much.

I am the one who fears,
I am the one who trusts,
I am the one who begs you,
Oh, dear, I love you so much.

I am the one who needs you,
I am the one who’d last,
I am the one who reads you,
Oh, dear, I love you so much.

I am the one, I miss you,
I am the one who cries,
I am the one who reasons,
Oh, dear, I love you so much.

Lend me your mind so gracious,
Lend me your hand, be kind,
I am the one who loves you,
Oh, dear, I love you so much.

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Posted: Jan 2011

About this poem:

I would gladly surrender this poem to anyone willing to write a melody for it.

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Comments (5)

niah9Auckland, New ZealandJan 10, 2011

Lovely sentiment Marikia....Niah

Swan87Syria, QatarJan 10, 2011

Beautifully Written Dearest !
Fav.Part :

I am the one who needs you,
I am the one who’d last,
I am the one who reads you,
Oh, dear, I love you so much.

Loved it !! Keep goin'

Swan

FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKJan 10, 2011

Hi Marikia

That is indeed a poem with an excellent flow and very expressive lyrics, I am sure it would lend itself to being set to music.

A fine write

Bill x

marikiaOPTbilisi, GeorgiaJan 10, 2011

Thank you so much, dears, for your kind words. It is only because of you that I keep doing what I am doing, knowing you are here to read and find pleasure from time to time.

Fellsman, your appreciation gives me hope that, if I try, I will make it, in a simple way, in the end.