big Questions Some little Answers

Feb 2011 824 Views 20 comments

The big Questions & Some little Answers

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Q:
If I can hold your gaze and tell you truly
That you mean more than all the world to me

A:
I would smile and reply you softly
that you mean all the universe to me
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Q:
If you would think me brash - but not unduly
Would you accept this heart of mine for free?

A:
I would n’ver deny it finality
No matter how nervy that you would be
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Q:
If I would love you like I love no other
And overcoming all impediment

A:
I would not look for anyone never
You would be the one my heart adores
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Q:
If we could spend our lives with one another
Would you suppose your time with me well spent?

A:
I would give you all my time; moreover,
The rest of my breath would be for'ver yours.
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^_^ MY POEM IS AS FOLLOWS:
(I wanna answer Fellsman's BIG Q! lol thats all...LOL) :P

I would smile and reply you softly
that you mean all the universe to me

I would n’ver deny it finality
No matter how nervy that you would be

I would not look for anyone never
You would be the one my heart adores

I would give you all my time; moreover,
The rest of my breath would be for'ver yours.

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Posted: Feb 2011

About this poem:

For St Valentines...

I think I can do better than this IF I don't have some pressure.. LOL (waiting for me) lololol

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Comments (20)

FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKFeb 10, 2011

Hi thesunandthesea

Hi Jib

You come close to writing a great sonnet, I am sure you could write one before Feb 14th.

I am very flattered that my poem "The Big Question" would trigger such a delightful response... Wait till Macduff and the rest of the fellows read this

Sassy, you can certainly charm the birds from the trees and the fish from the seas. This has sure brightened up my day.

Kindest regards

Bill

And a very happy St Valentine's day to you...

thesunandtheseaOPTampa, Florida USAFeb 10, 2011

Did I tell you that I wanna write Sonnet before Valentine???

I dunno what you're talking about??? I just wanna complete someone's Q. so thats it...

Was it called Sonnet? LOL :P

:P

Hold on , i'm gonna post a pic of your poem... in a few mins..

PS. SERIOUSLY THANK YOU!!!!

((((( I dont know how to 'THANK YOU' to you to let you know how much I wanna thanks you. (lol confusing eh? ) OK, THANK YOU SO SO SO VERY MUCH MR. FELLSMAN))))))

jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeFeb 10, 2011

what a beautiful poem we have here deary,,KUDOS

mcradloffPlatteville, Wisconsin USAFeb 10, 2011

I really appreciate you writing and commenting on my poems! I also like the rest of my breath would be forever yours, touching!

thesunandtheseaOPTampa, Florida USAFeb 10, 2011

Jeddah THANK YOOOOOU))))))
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you are beautiful too! ^__^ heehee nice ! I loved your pic!

thesunandtheseaOPTampa, Florida USAFeb 10, 2011

mcradloff : OH------ FINAALLY!!!!! YOU HAVE A FACE!!cute face too!!!

! OH-O-H-OH-OOO
LOL

I'M LUCKY !!! yeahhh Thank you soooo much for your comment and that Sentense "the rest of my breath........" was mine not Mr. Fellsman's!!!

YESSSSS!!!!!!

XXXXX I'm DOUBLE HAPPY now!!!!

thank you soo soo soo much))) XXX

niah9Auckland, New ZealandFeb 10, 2011

sunandthesea...you are a forward thinker, a leader in another style, which we are beginning to get used to without acknowledging it as unique......what talent you have.....

waiting to be fully unleashed...Niah

thesunandtheseaOPTampa, Florida USAFeb 10, 2011

Niah...thank you for your nice comment...

I've to thank ^_^ Mr. Fellsman, he's asked the questions then I completed it.. ^_^ lol

I love St. Valentiens really!!! Wish St, Valentine brights you loads of -->

thesunandtheseaOPTampa, Florida USAFeb 10, 2011

BRINGS not ~~BRIGHTS~~ >_<// Typo.

SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKFeb 10, 2011

So clever... sweet and wonderfully romantic.
ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!

SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKFeb 10, 2011

P.S. TEAL IS MY FAVORITE COLOR!

thesunandtheseaOPTampa, Florida USAFeb 10, 2011

SCatlyn Thank you!!! ^________________^

TEAL is a nice color! ^___^ I think you are romantic!

Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaFeb 11, 2011

Sassy...I've said it before...you keep this place alive....and you've certainly picked a lovely poem to model off...I've been working my butt of every night this week trying to write the ultimate Valentine's sonnet...growl..growl...I'm starting to think it's all humbug!