by BentleeSmith Falls, Ontario, Canada
Aug 2009 562 Views 10 comments
~a place with no name~
a place where dark is light an light is dark there's sound everywhere, spectacled site there's a big willow o'er there close by's a pony on spring legs n a father an son fishin off the dock in the sky's a flock of clouds fluffy white... ah...an far away soars an eagle up high there's a grasshopper on your knee as he touches it with a smile an says thank you Bobby lets walk awhile please pass me my white walking stick.....
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Posted: Aug 2009
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Comments (10)
Rob
in my case , i read it 6 times to understand, did you forgot to put some comas, fullstops ?
i am not sure about it, but it helps me to better in some words,
a nice one, bentlee,
sabeel.