A Gentleness

She reminded me of linen and lace
I surely imagined Lavender in the air
Common when I but a boyish face
When vaseing flowers took a flair

Her tender spoken name was Grace
She moved agilely with keen intent
Gliding silently with little trace
Naive but wise and feelings evident

No games...no lies...no arrogant ways
She shyly spoke... her words portrayed
The truth she spoke each and every day
I had thought to go but now I stayed

Openness within her heart...and soul
Honesty eminated from dusk til dawn
Refreshed my spirit as the day grew old
I felt a weakening as my heart grew fond

Yet in her innocence...in her passion
An openness I'd never known or seen
I came to fall in love in my own fashion
Oh such a blessing from a human being

My armour down... my feelings raw
A woman at last that finally understood
I felt my heart warm and then thaw
Just bare it all and please love the good
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Posted: May 2011
About this poem:
I'm really not much for mind games.
Appreciate honesty and openness.

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niah9
Oh boyshchrm.....lovely poem....reminded me of days gone by, though we know it exists today......just have to look for it...Niahwow teddybear
boyshchrm6
Thanks Niah. Always appreciate your comments.
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daciana1
" My armour down...my feelings raw"

Well, truth, but sometimes we must play games!

Thank you for sharing this piece of art! handshake
boyshchrm6
Thanks so much for your comments Daciana.
Yes, usually we play the silly games....
and there are no winners.angel cool comfort hug
mike7375
To find the person who makes me write something like this...that is my quest. Great and gentle write. Thanks Boyshchrm thumbs up
jazzy75
A gentle poem my friend....I think it highlighted your softer side very wellhug
Pinkpoetress
A very nice and gentle poem from a gentleman. This one was really good. Thank you for sharing.
gnj4u
Hi, boyshchrm6,
A Gentleness captures not only Grace but also the poet. Well done!
stilllooking66
This is such a sweet poem... kiss you have great talent and a kind, wonderful heart...hug teddybear
kickit22
i can see myelf sitting on a deck in the late morning with the warmth of the suns rays and reading A gentleness thumbs up beer
boyshchrm6
Thanks Mike. Good luck on your Quest.
At least have fun along he way.angel cool comfort cheers
Fellsman
Hi boyshchrms

This is a quite delightful and romantic read, I enjoyed it from first to last...

Best wishes

Bill cheers
Odette67
Yet in her innocence...in her passion
An openness I'd never known or seen
I came to fall in love in my own fashion
Oh such a blessing from a human being

Beautiful poem, rather Bironesque.

Christina handshake
boyshchrm6
Thanks Jazzy. I have a softer side?
hug angel peace cheers teddybear
boyshchrm6
Thanks for your wonderful comment PinkP.
angel kiss hug bouquet
boyshchrm6
Thanks so much for your comment Gnj4u
angel cool hug teddybear
boyshchrm6
Yeh....gosh....shucks! Stilllooking!!!..lol
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stilllooking66
bouquet I'm 'stilllooking' --- too.... (pardon the pun)laugh I come back and reread this every so often -- I think it's a sweet poem... written by a 'sweetie' no doubt...bouquet
boyshchrm6
Thanks Kickit...that's a really nice comment.
thumbs up cool cheers
boyshchrm6
Thanks Bill. Really appreciated your
kind comments.angel cool grin
boyshchrm6
Thank Christina. It's good to know there
are true honest romantics left.angel thumbs up cool hug
Poetnumber1
A true romantic at heart,its very soothing,this read is just a delight.handshake beer
elo69
it is a nice poem with a good honest feel....what else can we really do.....keep working on are own side of the fence and hope fore the best....great gentle write.....elo
pilgrimageoflove
Beautiful poetry!
Earlgreytea
[I felt a weakening as my heart grew fond]

wow! this stirs the primeval heart of every male, to be understood and appreciated for who we really are, warts and all..., applause
boyshchrm6
Thanks Still looking. Hope you will be
back soon. angel thumbs up cool hug
country_lady67
Made my knees get weak... awesomebouquet hug
boyshchrm6
thanks Poetnumber1. Im glad
it is soothing. TY cool angel grin
boyshchrm6
Thanks Elo. Good advice. Keep working
on ourselves...One must love oneself
before they can love another.thumbs up angel cool grin
boyshchrm6
Thanks pilgramageoflove for your comment.
Gotta love open honest feelings.angel cool cheers
boyshchrm6
Thanks for commenting EarlGreyT.
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thelmatalla
Gentle, heart warming poetry, lovely as a rose.bouquet teddybear
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