Caressing your hand below the knuckles A kiss to your forehead oh so insanely tender Flirting with so many laughs and chuckles Mixed feelings as if combined in a blender
Talking so sincerely when waiting for pizza You walked beside me oh so intently spritely A rose to make you happy when I greet ya Talking to you oh so candid and politely
A better man whenever I was near you Your natural sweetness never seemed to wane A feeling I had and I knew you had it too Poignant moments we shall never have again
I looked at you with that wonderful smile So happy and natural to exude such true joy You looked into my eyes for such a long while You made me feel like a young love struck boy
If love makes one smitten then surely I was If happiness makes one most beautiful you were I fell for you so hard...why...you know because Both our spirits and hearts began to yearn and stir
A bottle of wine and memories of laughing Stories told to display ones character and soul Caresses, kisses, hesitant words but refreshing Only fragments now that exact their cruel toll
Hi, boyshchrm6, Fragments ...Mixed feelings as if combined in a blender...a bittersweet mixture, 'tis this. But, insanely tender...now, that's some kiss!
Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaJul 29, 2011
Boysh,
A lovely poem...people sprout cliches at me saying things like we've all been there but really every personal experience is unique. A great write.
Fragments of a diamond...brilliant write my friend. glad to see you back
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKJul 29, 2011
If love makes one smitten then surely I was If happiness makes one most beautiful you were I fell for you so hard...why...you know because Both our spirits and hearts began to yearn and stir
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Hope you are well and all is good, Andrew...
niah
Fragments ...Mixed feelings as if combined in a blender...a bittersweet mixture, 'tis this. But, insanely tender...now, that's some kiss!
A lovely poem...people sprout cliches at me saying things like we've all been there but really every personal experience is unique. A great write.
Hope all is well with you also.
Q~S
aha, i see, is this the only time you're sincere? ok, ok, just kidding, great love poem , thanks for sharing...
If happiness makes one most beautiful you were
I fell for you so hard...why...you know because
Both our spirits and hearts began to yearn and stir
This is so romantic lovely
Mid 80's most days....lol.
Thanks for your comment.
A poignant love poem which runs the full gamut of emotions, and congratulations on finding a rhyme for "pizza".
An enjoyable read...
Bill
rob
that hurts so much when rebuffed...
Niah.
not my intention.
Appreciate it pretty lady.