Her laugh was like a rainbow promising gold. Her voice was consoling like that of a angel. Her step was adventurous and ever bold. Her prescence put everyone under her spell
Her countenance was assuring and charming. Her smile was like sunshine and blue sky. Her eyes sparkled and were most inviting. Her singing was like a bird that would soon fly.
Her movements were sure and deliberate. Her heart was compassionate and most true. Her soul was pure and her kindness great. Her love for her man was solid, sustaining too.
Her laugh was like a rainbow promising gold. He longed for this marvelous fun loving woman. If only the love she had was his to hold. If only it was he she loved and not another man.
If only he could quietly instantly change places. If only to bend the foundation of creativity. If only he could change two bodies and faces. If only he could direct time to a new reality.
If only to make this wondrous creature his. If only she wasn’t beyond his passionate reach. If only she was “mine not his”, but tis. If only he could erase her memories each.
Her laugh was like a rainbow promising gold. If only he could forget her to never again see. If only he could make the visions grow very old. Pure gold. Pure majic. Pure illusion. Pure misery.
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Posted: Sep 2009
About this poem:
People sometimes innocently fall in love with one already spoken for.
andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKSep 13, 2009
....and if he could do all that, she wouldn't be the person he fell in love with, would she? So misery, not happiness would follow. I think we are what we are, when the right spirit encouters yours, without either saying both just know.......all in my own humble opinion of course.....lol.Good poem thankyou.....andrew.
dear poet, we cannot imagine , what happening next. we are not sure our partner is the best but we are trying to be her the best.we like to be made for each other.
why all poets write poems about women. why not about men ?
Sabeel: Sometimes along life's path some people unwittingly have feelings for someone they shouldn't and that causes inner turmoil. We all strive to find our soulmate and let the love endure. You are right. There should be more love poems revolving around men.
gypsyheartSouth coast of KwaZulu Natal, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaSep 14, 2009
A very beautiful and well written poem boyshchrm6-you expressed it very well
andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKSep 14, 2009
apologies boychrm, got my he's and she's mixed in my comment yesterday, still taking nothing away from a really good poem....I did enjoy it, thankyou....andrew....note to my self...do not multitask, while reading or commenting on poetry....wrist slapped!
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I think we are what we are, when the right spirit encouters yours, without either saying both just know.......all in my own humble opinion of course.....lol.Good poem thankyou.....andrew.
we cannot imagine , what happening next.
we are not sure our partner is the best but we are trying to be her the best.we like to be made for each other.
why all poets write poems about women. why not about men ?
sabeel.
some people unwittingly have feelings for someone they
shouldn't and that causes inner turmoil. We all strive
to find our soulmate and let the love endure. You are
right. There should be more love poems revolving
around men.
Without the lows, we wouldn't appreciate
the view from the peaks as much.
before we even realize it if the traits we cherish are there.
Quit crying, I have.
comments.
Appreciate your input and your fine poetry.
just love it
thankyou!
but still appreciate your comment.
Yes we Occassionally do have feelings-but rarely lol