Strewn upon the grass lay my thorny rose Seed melts into life with direction known That split in the road leads to my front door In vengeance the passion unite's to conform.
Strewn upon the grass lay my thorny rose I seek to familiar my thought I suppose Bewildered while taking your thoughts you impose With your fertilized mind where you think you're so right.
The back of my shell opens up then I leave Checkmate holds you close as you need to imply Radical version of disciplined mind Takes you over the edge "n" back into your time~
Welcome back, Bentlee, with your thought-provoking poetry, which always sets me thinking. I have to read this one again or maybe several times. Thank you for sharing.
I'm still reading and pondering this one.. I do like it though, you've come a long way..Kudos on a great write. and please send some of that "Unblock" my way.. could sure use it.. hope you've been well...drop me a line when you get a chance..
andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKAug 15, 2011
Yo...QS....how are you my friend....so many people coming out tonight...hope you are really well...great to see you...xxx
QS ty .......are you still pondering lol, hope ur well and ty for commenting, talk soon,
RedexNorthumberland, England UKAug 20, 2011
I liked your poem Bently and had to think, how had life shaped me? At the moment I find it an adventure, and opening doors that would never have tried before, becoming a bit of a Ah but a nice one Good to see you around again.
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Ah but a nice one Good to see you around again.