~a walk in your park~

Strewn upon the grass lay my thorny rose
Seed melts into life with direction known
That split in the road leads to my front door
In vengeance the passion unite's to conform.

Strewn upon the grass lay my thorny rose
I seek to familiar my thought I suppose
Bewildered while taking your thoughts you impose
With your fertilized mind where you think you're so right.

The back of my shell opens up then I leave
Checkmate holds you close as you need to imply
Radical version of disciplined mind
Takes you over the edge "n" back into your time~




~Bentlee~
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Posted: Aug 2011
About this poem:
how did life shape you?

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andrew149
Ah what a final question to ask, have you got all night?...A fine write from a master....well written my friend, and so welcome back too....Andrew...cool
jazzy75
Hey Bentlee! Great to see you back!!wave ....and with such a thought provoking write....may we all be more aware of the journey...and the walkhug
Bentlee
wine Hi Jazzy ty and a hug hope ur well girl. wine
marikia
Welcome back, Bentlee, with your thought-provoking poetry, which always sets me thinking. I have to read this one again or maybe several times. Thank you for sharing.wine bouquet
QuietStormF
I'm still reading and pondering this one.. I do like it though, you've come a long way..Kudos on a great write. and please send some of that "Unblock" my way.. could sure use it.. laugh hope you've been well...drop me a line when you get a chance..hug bouquet teddybear
andrew149
Yo...QS....how are you my friend....so many people coming out tonight...hope you are really well...great to see you...xxx
Bentlee
ty Marikia, for enjoying my writes, ah perhaps some are deep lol but they are what they say, cheers hug wine
Bentlee
QS ty .......are you still pondering lol, hope ur well and ty for commenting, talk soon, hug wine
Redex
I liked your poem Bently and had to think, how had life shaped me? At the moment I find it an adventure, and opening doors that would never have tried before, becoming a bit of a devil
Ah but a nice onerolling on the floor laughing Good to see you around again.cheers
Bentlee
hello Redex, ty sweetie, good for you to go into new doors not knowing whats on the other side. That rocks, hope your well, wine hug
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