Angel In The Park

Her eyes are brighter then a morning sun
They burn with soft flames of desire
Has the greatest love of my life begun
My heart is on burning smoking fire
Lifting a hand to shield her face I shun
Too breathless to speak afraid to enquire
My whole body shakes inside I am stunned
Beauty too brilliant to behold or aquire
I awake like a dream in a harrowing run
The ground is lifting me higher and higher
Far above the clouds my whole body is spun
Then no fear for what next must transpire
With deep breath I just smile with fun
"Pardon me Miss but have we ever met prior?"
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Posted: Oct 2011
About this poem:
In my dreams.....haha

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steve1223
In many men's dreams grin grin
Ayhra
You made me smile with this one yankee4u, it's so sweet, nice writing :) applause bouquet teddybear
Mycalling
Great title, sweet poemapplause
kickit22
hi yankee i know i have not commented much on your poems but I do really enjoy your writings and this does not fail again.

kickit.
Yankee4youonline today!
Steve223...yepper buddy...how I know....Ayhira...smiling right back at you :).....Mycalling...thanks...Kickit,,,thanks...I'm a huge fan of you !! dancing
arose1791
I like this one, keep coming back to it. Speaks aloud . . dont know quite how to put it teddybear
pilgrimageoflove
A nice dream, brilliantly expressed.
Yankee4youonline today!
arose.....its you
arose1791
awwww teddybear
Odette67
Her eyes are brighter then a morning sun
They burn with soft flames of desire
Has the greatest love of my life begun
My heart is on burning smoking fire

I never knew how romantic men could be...till I started writing poetry 9 yr ago. I was brought up around men who never showed their feelings. Such a lovely poem Yankee.
purple heart
godsprincessonline today!
Women also have their dreams. Unfortunately - reality prevails in the real world for most of us. Still looking for my male dreamer part.

Kathy
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