~Elated~

of soft heart an tender spirit sky blue mind endear it. . . . leaves let go an gentle sweep to their ground, tall grass rustle's only sound. . . . eight o'clock lake's flat'nd glasss while a host circled ripples as fish eat n play. . . . crickets n frogs instrumentally wake the nigh with magical banter seranade. . . . a distant howl an hoot to the moon lit end of twilight, when same shadows come out from ending sun to moonlight.......as what's there in the day's there in the night~
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Posted: Sep 2009

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Comments (15)

andrew149
wonderful bentlee, do I detect a sweetening of style going on here my friend, and if there is, tis for the better.......andrew.
amahlala
Yes Andrew, his poetry has seemed to take on a much sweeter vein lately...he must be HAPPY!
Bentlee
Shhhhh, careful what you write he's right here lol :)
amahlala
Oh..we noticed you were here...we just didn't think u were paying attention! lol
andrew149
well said ama, bentlee shut, up you only wrote it.......yep HAPPY I reckon too ama!!!
Bentlee
Ah too funny Andrew, yeah only the poet not the commentator eh cheers my friend lol. ty for the laughs:)
fareaway
love the flow its like a rhythm
thankyou..
blessings
Bentlee
Ty Andrew, tryin a few different ways out an see where it goes:)
poetengineer
i like this one , you always surprise me with your sweet new ideas,simpley amazing words , thanks for ur sahre my dear bentlee
aware3
So very heartfelt, that it is allows the reader to bask in the emotions that r, so beautifully surrendered in this poem ! Blessings, aware3wave
trurorob
What I like about this Bentlee is it takes me there, I can taste the peace and the silence, nothing better than a lovely twilight
Rob
Bentlee
Ty fareaway i'm happy you found some connection it this:)
Bentlee
Ty aware, very line thoughts an words you've shared:)
Bentlee
Khaled, i thought this one would reach inside you as it did, ty for sharing your thoughts.
Bentlee
Ah Rob you dove in head first an lived it as you read it. Cool glad to hear, ty for your thoughts:)
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