by BentleeSmith Falls, Ontario, Canada
Nov 2011 737 Views 6 comments
~A whisper of your breath~
Is really all I need
not to create me
simply to satisfy my plea.
In standing I'm guilty
of love that's been found
my heart is in shadow
your whisper has no sound.
As a thought of you, comes by through the day
sand just won't fall, till that thought go's away
it arrives without you, where ever you are
adrift in my mind, a shining bright star.
~Bentlee~
not to create me
simply to satisfy my plea.
In standing I'm guilty
of love that's been found
my heart is in shadow
your whisper has no sound.
As a thought of you, comes by through the day
sand just won't fall, till that thought go's away
it arrives without you, where ever you are
adrift in my mind, a shining bright star.
~Bentlee~
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Posted: Nov 2011
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Comments (6)
"Lover whispers to my ear,
Better to be a prey than a hunter.
Make yourself My fool.
Stop trying to be the sun and become a speck!
Dwell at My door and be homeless.
Don't pretend to be a candle, be a moth,
so you may taste the savor of Life
and know the power hidden in serving.
("Whispers of Love" by Jalal ad-Din Rumi)
Loved your poem, expressing much in few sweet words so close to heart. Wish you luck!
" Will cause women to swoon from the shear beauty of the words "
Here I made a lable for you.