**~... I Wonder ...~**

I wonder where it all went wrong
When did this love fade away
It seemed a perfect match to be
But yet it did not stay

Friends and lovers true in heart
The good and bad times shared
I thought our love would hold us tight
Emotions were never spared

But now we stand a world apart
With tears welled in our eyes
Not knowing now what to say
For fear it would be lies

Time to say good bye my love
Turn and walk away
I’ll save the memory of my dreams
To relive another day

That tender spot deep inside
I’ll carry for years to come
And know that once I had true love
A joy only known to some
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: May 2012

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lucy1777
hugs clodyteddybear very well written with lots of emotions.
CloudySky
Thanks Lucy. Not a recent emotion, but sometimes memories come back with a poignancy that must be put to written word. wine
niah9
It doesn't matter when it happened....we retain the memory when it hurts deeply.....
I imagine as the words slipped onto the screen, you felt the pain like it was yesterday...well written, and sadly from the heart....Kathyhug comfort
swade777
Another TERRIFIC contribution Cloudy! You have a 'Hallmark' method of conveying such deep truths with very easy to understand language! That is a talent in and of it's self!! I KNOW the message of this poem very well from personal experience! Even as a man!! hug
Fellsman
Hi Cloudy

Your use of rhyme just gets better and better, I hope you don't mind me adding you to my "Must read" list...

A fine write.

Bill gift wine
deeprootlove1
rely very touching words,thanks for share
LadyMorgana60
A deep & meaningful poem Cloudy
Wonderful writing! wine yay
CloudySky
Niah, you are so right. Feels just as real as if it happened yesterday, but thankfully writing is such a release of the negative emotions.
CloudySky
Wow, I'm on Fellsman's "must read list" what an honor, thank you. dancing
CloudySky
Thank you DeepRoot for your kind comments. Glad this touched you. hug
CloudySky
Thank you LadyM. Hard to walk away sometimes, but at least the good memories are left behind.
studecar
I'm sorry you have such a deep hurt,I wish I could help. studecar
Ahyra
Very nice poem Cloudy thumbs up bouquet
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