hugs clody very well written with lots of emotions.
CloudySkyOPMoreno Valley, California USAMay 12, 2012
Thanks Lucy. Not a recent emotion, but sometimes memories come back with a poignancy that must be put to written word.
niah9Auckland, New ZealandMay 13, 2012
It doesn't matter when it happened....we retain the memory when it hurts deeply..... I imagine as the words slipped onto the screen, you felt the pain like it was yesterday...well written, and sadly from the heart....Kathy
swade777Grants Pass Area, Oregon USAMay 13, 2012
Another TERRIFIC contribution Cloudy! You have a 'Hallmark' method of conveying such deep truths with very easy to understand language! That is a talent in and of it's self!! I KNOW the message of this poem very well from personal experience! Even as a man!!
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKMay 13, 2012
Hi Cloudy
Your use of rhyme just gets better and better, I hope you don't mind me adding you to my "Must read" list...
A fine write.
Bill
deeprootlove1riyadh, Ar Riyad Saudi ArabiaMay 13, 2012
rely very touching words,thanks for share
LadyMorgana60Norwich, Norfolk, England UKMay 13, 2012
A deep & meaningful poem Cloudy Wonderful writing!
CloudySkyOPMoreno Valley, California USAMay 14, 2012
Niah, you are so right. Feels just as real as if it happened yesterday, but thankfully writing is such a release of the negative emotions.
CloudySkyOPMoreno Valley, California USAMay 14, 2012
Wow, I'm on Fellsman's "must read list" what an honor, thank you.
CloudySkyOPMoreno Valley, California USAMay 14, 2012
Thank you DeepRoot for your kind comments. Glad this touched you.
CloudySkyOPMoreno Valley, California USAMay 14, 2012
Thank you LadyM. Hard to walk away sometimes, but at least the good memories are left behind.
studecarsayre, Oklahoma USAMay 16, 2012
I'm sorry you have such a deep hurt,I wish I could help. studecar
AhyraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaMay 17, 2012
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I imagine as the words slipped onto the screen, you felt the pain like it was yesterday...well written, and sadly from the heart....Kathy
Your use of rhyme just gets better and better, I hope you don't mind me adding you to my "Must read" list...
A fine write.
Bill
Wonderful writing!