~APPAULED~

perhaps we are on a plain of a future to bring us to the next, yet I can't fathom why it's an all about me world, so much anger, non due expression, finger pointin attitudes, is from sunrise to sunset, most in retreat of future livin in lights out past, gettin stronger that way, as it shows day by day, what the hell's goin on I dare you ask self, what'll twenty years bring with no changes today, a cause worthy of fight yet in numbers the way. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .~
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Posted: Oct 2009
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Is it worth tryin to help make a change with each one little voice! :)

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amahlala
I've just been receiving all these random sayings to get over my bad attitude and yours is number 5 in less than hour...Thanks!hug
Bentlee
Ah now Ama they're all wrong lol ur tude's fine. :) an remember the def of random so ur safe lol cheers my friend:)
sshore
i just love this poem..
TY
bouquet
jazzy75
Bentlee - wonderful, thought provoking poem applause
Bentlee
Ty shhores it is a bitter harsh reality of daily life for sure, definately sad but true. Ty for your thoughts an glad you enjoyed it:)
Bentlee
Ty jazzy yes it is thought provokin I also believe each person can help make a minute difference and collectively in time it could slowly change:)
jazzy75
Bentlee - yes, that shift is occuring...you are right on :-)
poetengineer
yes we should make some changes for our life sometimes , thanks for ur share
Bentlee
Ur right jazzy it is occuring slowly, an it's what is happening here that helps as well, by talkin an passin a message:)
gypsyheart
Very good poem Bentlee-what will 20years bring with no changes today-very truethumbs up hug peace
trurorob
One extra little voice could turn into a chorus my friend hopefully
Rob
Bentlee
It's never too late Khaled my friend to makes good changes eh, ty for your thoughts:)
Bentlee
Yes Gypsy, thats my wish is for more personal peace amongst the people. Ty for reading an your comment:)
Bentlee
Rob I agree a hundred p cent with you, ty for your ideas an thoughts:)
boyshchrm6
We must try and bring changes..for the next generation.cool angel doh crying doh crying
sshore
yes its worth the entire worldangel
Bentlee
We do boysh as well as an embrace by the next generations to make it work. Ty for your thoughts.
Bentlee
Ty yes Sshore it's exactly how you said it:) ty for commenting:)
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