Steve, vielen Dank für Ihr Gedicht! Freedom is the greatest thing we have. Its only when boundaries are compromized that it becomes a problem. Without fences we can be tempted to something like your beautiful poem says:
"How good it feels to run amok And eat all that's around me Maybe I can jump to neighbouring house And start the process over"
niah9Auckland, New ZealandMay 23, 2012
Ah......Steve...is it cold over the ditch....clever write because of it anyway.....enjoyed picking up the clues...since I have just put the heaters on.....Kathy
paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandMay 23, 2012
poem yet hot with deep meaning.I'm cold out here.
windyweatherlySan Francisco, California USAMay 23, 2012
STEVE MY DEAREST FRIEND. WE ARE HAVING SO MUCH FUN. WE FLEW TO CAIRNS AND STAYED IN ONE OF THE BEST HOTEL HERE AND NOW WE ARE IN A VAN AND TRAVEL ALL OVER THE PLACE BACK TO SYNEY.
I LOVE IT STEVE AND THANK YOU GUYS FOR YOUR AMAZING COUNTRY AND UNBELIEVABLE HOSPITALITY.
NO MOMENT SPENT THAT IS NOW HEAVENLY AND EDED LIKE STEVE., \
THANK YOU MY FRIEND..
JOHN AND PHYLLIS
morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeMay 23, 2012
Steve looks like you ran away from The assylum ...good write...but I still cant forget the one you wrote...Shut the hell up !!!
steve1223OPadelaide, South Australia AustraliaMay 23, 2012
Thank you orientalkoru for your comment...nice to hear from you
AhyraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaMay 23, 2012
steve1223OPadelaide, South Australia AustraliaMay 23, 2012
Thank you niah9 for your comment...always nice to hear from you...trust you to pick up the clues...getting cold over here...this is the first time we had a fire in our new home...Mariette had great fun getting it going...so nice to sit in front of an open fire getting toasty warm enjoying a nice glass of red...take care of yourself...best wishes to you
steve1223OPadelaide, South Australia AustraliaMay 23, 2012
You are so right paloma66...even though we might write a poem with a single meaning in mind on re-reading it we suddenly find there are more interpretations that can be had...you always dig much deeper than the surface...I always look forward with anticipation to your comments
steve1223OPadelaide, South Australia AustraliaMay 23, 2012
Thank you John and Phyllis....take care
steve1223OPadelaide, South Australia AustraliaMay 23, 2012
Thank you morgen90210 for dropping by...glad someone still gets a laugh out of 'Shut The Hell Up'...still don't know how it became so popular
Comments (12)
Freedom is the greatest thing we have.
Its only when boundaries are compromized
that it becomes a problem. Without fences
we can be tempted to something like your
beautiful poem says:
"How good it feels to run amok
And eat all that's around me
Maybe I can jump to neighbouring house
And start the process over"
I LOVE IT STEVE AND THANK YOU GUYS FOR YOUR AMAZING COUNTRY AND UNBELIEVABLE HOSPITALITY.
NO MOMENT SPENT THAT IS NOW HEAVENLY AND EDED LIKE STEVE.,
\
THANK YOU MY FRIEND..
JOHN AND PHYLLIS
Rob