Oh God!!! This incredible pain Claws raking across my brain Ripping it, shredding it Piece by piece splattering on the walls And as my vision fades And the last sound I hear Is the demonic laughter Of my tormentor As I am cut off from this world
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Posted: Jul 2012
About this poem:
I am out there ... are you next on my menu ... beware ... it might be you I am coming for
morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeJul 15, 2012
This Guy here makes Fredy Kruger look like fried chicken ! Nice one .
jena_massieBangalore, Karnataka IndiaJul 15, 2012
the element of horror displayed is great not to mention your words that virtually leap and dance around infernos these emoticons are supposed to tell you how i feel now
paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandJul 16, 2012
A cauldron of dark emotions waiting to be stirred,are you ok Steve? But it is a way of spewing out what we feel I feel better after I did write about the pain someone caused me.
windyweatherlySan Francisco, California USAJul 16, 2012
Night Terror by: steve1223
Oh God!!! This incredible pain Claws raking across my brain Ripping it, shredding it Piece by piece splattering on the walls And as my vision fades And the last sound I hear Is the demonic laughter Of my tormentor As I am cut off from this world
I am concerned, too, Steve, I hope all is fine or do you need some sort of company? I might ask my love, to come and visit you...
steve1223OPadelaide, South Australia AustraliaJul 17, 2012
Thank you all for your comments ... have to keep my hand (or is it pen) in writing dark poetry once in a while
Comments (5)
Nice one .
these emoticons are supposed to tell you how i feel now
But it is a way of spewing out what we feel I feel better after I did write about the pain someone caused me.
by: steve1223
Oh God!!! This incredible pain
Claws raking across my brain
Ripping it, shredding it
Piece by piece splattering on the walls
And as my vision fades
And the last sound I hear
Is the demonic laughter
Of my tormentor
As I am cut off from this world
I am concerned, too, Steve, I hope all is fine or do you need some sort of company? I might ask my love, to come and visit you...