Seldom do my thoughts roam so running wild With such passion that lights my heart on fire When you strolled by me your sweet smile beguiled Nothing could stop the heat of my desire
Help me if you believe I cannot hide There's no chance to escape your lovely eyes Exists any place for more truth to confide Without running away with deceit and lies
Life becomes like a universe divides Step away from its center a distance What will cause us an event to collide Is plotting a course of least resistance
So next time you think we don't stand a chance Remember what turns love into romance
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Posted: Aug 2012
About this poem:
Abstract about how two items in the universe attract and collide despite all the forces that propels them away from each other...kind of like love and physics....maybe....perhaps??? :)
Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaAug 12, 2012
Hi Yankee,
A good analogy in your sonnet. When does attraction turn into "collision" in relationships?
morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeAug 12, 2012
Nice metafor !
LadyMorgana60Norwich, Norfolk, England UKAug 12, 2012
Hi Yankee, I have always admired your sonnets and this one no less.. there is no logic pattern nor a clear explanation in black or white for one to grasp.. Its a feeling...to which some may complicate..I say no physics involved..but then that's me :) Thanks for sharing your fine sonnet
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoAug 12, 2012
I love the flow Yankee and of course the message at the end is a plus.I see light and what romance entails through the poet's eyes,well penned M.M
Hi, Yankee4you, What will cause us an event to collide Is plotting a course of least resistance... Or, is it, when things meet resistance, to stay fast and go the distance? Enjoyed thinking about Close Encounters. Thanks for sharing.
Hi there Yankee, There is a lot of real chemistry involved in the science of attraction, in the universe no two bodies are precisely the same so the gravity of one will eventually pull in the other, so from binary to collision I guess and that could always be applied to love as well as the cosmos, very cool thoughts. Love your poetry
Hi Joy..... yes...that moment of resistance...for men must not stare too long should they....no wonder its so hard sometimes to feel something very comfortable so close yet once again watch it orbit far away
LadyB...It is exactly that...something more than reason or senses just sort of draw me towards another...and me so clumsy at times...most of the time....just don't react in time....or well....or whatever it is just ain't happening...haha
Happychatty1unknown, Lancashire, England UKOct 5, 2017
Comments (12)
A good analogy in your sonnet. When does attraction turn into "collision" in relationships?
there is no logic pattern nor a clear explanation in black or white for one to grasp.. Its a feeling...to which some may complicate..I say no physics involved..but then that's me :)
Thanks for sharing your fine sonnet
What will cause us an event to collide Is plotting a course of least resistance... Or, is it, when things meet resistance, to stay fast and go the distance? Enjoyed thinking about Close Encounters. Thanks for sharing.
There is a lot of real chemistry involved in the science of attraction, in the universe no two bodies are precisely the same so the gravity of one will eventually pull in the other, so from binary to collision I guess and that could always be applied to love as well as the cosmos, very cool thoughts.
Love your poetry