Would you just stand there and let me be

by morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore

Aug 2012 617 Views 5 comments

Would you just stand there and let me be?

I mean no harm and yet been found,
Guilty of crimes when I am nice,
I Dont want to be nice anymore,
Putting up and getting trash.

Who am I trying to impress?
You,she,or him ,it is anybody guess!
When you are like me all alone,
I ask each of you ,who do You have?

Friends,lover or even a wife?
The air I breathe is getting cold...
Could have saved me if you had..
And now my conscious slipping by..

Heavy eyelids still wants to see,
If a miracle could happen yet..
A slumber too deep is waiting patiently,
Will you just stand there and let me be...?

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Posted: Aug 2012

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Comments (5)

steve1223adelaide, South Australia AustraliaAug 22, 2012

That is a very deep write

PeneloperoseIpswich, Queensland AustraliaAug 22, 2012

no if you are drowning and feel the water is coming in over your head put your hand up and someone will save you.. Just put your hand up and someone will see you need saving and save you .

morgen90210OPsingapore, Central Singapore SingaporeAug 22, 2012

Thank you steve for your comment and PenRose... I Will raise my hand.
Fighting my demons as I got infected with a depressive bug from a friend!
Now getting it out of my system!

orientalkoruGlenella, Queensland AustraliaAug 22, 2012

Of course not my friend...if you're drowning I will raise the alarm...can't swim myself so best to get the lifeguards do their job! Seriously..I hope Danesh you are fine now dear...take care and keep writing...and hope it helps...