reveal

by Nuwahri61mackay, Queensland, Australia

Sep 2012 711 Views 12 comments

reveal

To unravel your words
With a wisdom of ages
To interpret them
With the knowlege of sages
To fill my own reasoning
With thoughts that share
Are hand written words
That the soul did prepare
Many ways you can see
Many ways you can feel
The honesty of ink
Is the way to reveal...

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Posted: Sep 2012

About this poem:

how you interpret anothers write............

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steve1223adelaide, South Australia AustraliaSep 19, 2012

It is amazing ... sometimes I can be so positive that what I am writing is so easy to understand ... then someone makes a comment that takes the poem and it's intention in a totally different direction ... I suppose we colour it with our life experiences and our perceptions

RedexNorthumberland, England UKSep 19, 2012

Yes I feel the same as steve but that is good keeps the mind open. Your poem depicts this perfectly no altered image here

goldenhindeunknown, Colorado USASep 19, 2012

I am a sweater with a loose thread.

Nice write.

Nuwahri61OPmackay, Queensland AustraliaSep 19, 2012

Thanks Redex ........appreciate your comments an your perception .....regards n61

goldenhindeunknown, Colorado USASep 19, 2012

Dear,
I am at a low at the moment. any possible grip, i would hold dear in hand as well. me, the sweater, is tough, but a bit worn.

morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeSep 20, 2012

Perfect to a T !
So true ,i do have that habit of deciphering the poems other write in different context ..
Those with many shades poems ,i'll be lost ..straight as an arrow ..moon is lunar and sun is sol,but some times we do get very out of this world comments ...lols thanks and sorry for this long comment.

orientalkoruGlenella, Queensland AustraliaSep 20, 2012

"Many ways you can see
Many ways you can feel
The honesty of ink
Is the way to reveal..."

Nu this is quite true! And the many angles we view things makes it more interesting. We can learn a lot from each other!

Nuwahri61OPmackay, Queensland AustraliaSep 20, 2012

Hey Morgen .....thats cool .....glad you could relate to it .......regards n61

Nuwahri61OPmackay, Queensland AustraliaSep 20, 2012

Hey OK......thanks for your comments ......perspective wether yours or mine will always differ ........the writer has the key in the form of how its submitted whether love hate happy sad is the basis i spose to try an identify the direction while not actually getting the point ......confused yeah me too