Nice descriptive imagery as you stroll along the beach with its unpredictable weather. Here in Florida as you enjoy the sun's rays for a while, coming clouds can make you run to find coverage...and run!! Thanks for sharing SM
Heck yeah Mick ………. Thanks for your thoughts regards Nu
AutumnChildUnknown, Central Serbia SerbiaJun 24, 2021
Hey, NU,
You always have good rhythm with the words which are so congruous in rhymes. And without rhymes poetry cannot be formed properly. Nice review on weather and its unplanned, interchangeable occurances.
What a difference the warm sun can make on a cold crisp rainy day!! Was toiling along with you as I read it. Take care - stay warm Nu!
Kathy
AutumnChildUnknown, Central Serbia SerbiaJun 25, 2021
.... OccuRREnces....
Just to correct myself. Words truly need to be treatened well in writing, in speaking. For non native speakers equally as for native ones. Without exception.
AutumnChildUnknown, Central Serbia SerbiaJun 25, 2021
Nice regards from HEATED Serbia.... I cought one more mistake. Well then. It is repaired now.
Srdacan pozdrav, NU!
AutumnChildUnknown, Central Serbia SerbiaJun 25, 2021
Well, this is going to be the last correction. I CAUGHT... What can I say. Irreparable chaser in me always fix things. Even the minor ones. Due to personal hindrances errors happen. But, obstinate spirit will not allow that mistakes stay unrepaired.
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Nice write Nu,
Good to be out 'n about.
Regards Mick
You always have good rhythm with the words which are so congruous in rhymes.
And without rhymes poetry cannot be formed properly.
Nice review on weather and its unplanned, interchangeable occurances.
Nice regards from heatened Serbia!
Thanks for your kind words
Appreciate you stopping by
Regards Nu
Kathy
Just to correct myself.
Words truly need to be treatened well in writing, in speaking.
For non native speakers equally as for native ones.
Without exception.
I cought one more mistake.
Well then.
It is repaired now.
Srdacan pozdrav, NU!
I CAUGHT...
What can I say.
Irreparable chaser in me always fix things.
Even the minor ones.
Due to personal hindrances errors happen.
But, obstinate spirit will not allow that mistakes stay unrepaired.
Once again, best of luck, Nu!