‘Twas a foggy foggy morn Down by the harbour wall A ships mast appeared Lurking ghostly and tall Out through the mist A canoeist appeared Striving for perfection His style all but revered Out to the horizon Where I thought it to be A sun was on the rise Trying to break free But the fog was the master In this story being told It’s depth like a glue Just taking its hold And just when I thought I couldn’t see any more A shaft of light broke through I could not ignore It reflected off the water In a shimmering way A circle of blue and silver What words could I say Astounded at the beauty That blessed me that day I reached for my pencil For words to portray ………
Your imagery was just beautiful. Enjoyed very much. SM
yasparkWilliamsville, New York USAJul 22, 2021
Dear OK, hope you agree, like many other strong emotions feeling jealous may be blinding. We may imagine things that are not there, e.g., mistake somebody!s sincere appreciation and compliments for the ambition to take Nu from you. Feels like there are more private ways to address your concerns other than using comments to Nu’s poems as a stage for expressing your concerns, just my five cents here.
Thanks Lily , Rob , SM and Yas … thanks very much for all the comments they are always respected and appreciated . Please forgive my lovely wife for her intense scrutiny of what happens here she has a beautiful heart . Regards Nu
@Nu Hey Nu, what's the point in telling people of my beautiful heart when you make it look like it doesn't count to the rest of the world? Trying to be too nice to the rest of the world as always, at the expense of your own bubble. Thanks for apologizing in my behalf but no thanks. Sorry but I would not apologize for my intense scrutiny as you call it... But you can of course apologize in my behalf as much as you want mate... it does not change the truth that sometimes what is seen and what really is are too different things. sad_flower:
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Rob
Regards Nu
Hey Nu, what's the point in telling people of my beautiful heart when you make it look like it doesn't count to the rest of the world? Trying to be too nice to the rest of the world as always, at the expense of your own bubble. Thanks for apologizing in my behalf but no thanks. Sorry but I would not apologize for my intense scrutiny as you call it... But you can of course apologize in my behalf as much as you want mate... it does not change the truth that sometimes what is seen and what really is are too different things. sad_flower: