It’s a bit foggy …..

‘Twas a foggy foggy morn
Down by the harbour wall
A ships mast appeared
Lurking ghostly and tall
Out through the mist
A canoeist appeared
Striving for perfection
His style all but revered
Out to the horizon
Where I thought it to be
A sun was on the rise
Trying to break free
But the fog was the master
In this story being told
It’s depth like a glue
Just taking its hold
And just when I thought
I couldn’t see any more
A shaft of light broke through
I could not ignore
It reflected off the water
In a shimmering way
A circle of blue and silver
What words could I say
Astounded at the beauty
That blessed me that day
I reached for my pencil
For words to portray ………
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Posted: Jul 2021
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Fog …..

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salamuna
Amasing paint Nu. you areone of the best in painting with words here. Many thanks. really enjoyed your poem . Re. Lily applause
trurorob
Nicely done NU, good reflections
Rob
southmiami4321online today!
Your imagery was just beautiful. Enjoyed very much. SM
yaspark
Dear OK, hope you agree, like many other strong emotions feeling jealous may be blinding. We may imagine things that are not there, e.g., mistake somebody!s sincere appreciation and compliments for the ambition to take Nu from you. Feels like there are more private ways to address your concerns other than using comments to Nu’s poems as a stage for expressing your concerns, just my five cents here.wave
Nuwahri61
Thanks Lily , Rob , SM and Yas … thanks very much for all the comments they are always respected and appreciated . Please forgive my lovely wife for her intense scrutiny of what happens here she has a beautiful heart .
Regards Nu conversing grin cool
orientalkoru
@Nu
Hey Nu, what's the point in telling people of my beautiful heart when you make it look like it doesn't count to the rest of the world? Trying to be too nice to the rest of the world as always, at the expense of your own bubble. Thanks for apologizing in my behalf but no thanks. Sorry but I would not apologize for my intense scrutiny as you call it... But you can of course apologize in my behalf as much as you want mate... it does not change the truth that sometimes what is seen and what really is are too different things. sad_flower:
southmiami4321online today!
Wow....Let there be peace...SM
realdeal890
cheers head banger
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