Week before Christmas

'Tis the week before Christmas
and all through the house
not a creature was stirring
but one bespectacled mouse
who came down from the attic
proclaiming himself free, and
now sits atop the Frasier Fir tree.

Stockings, draped over wing-backed chair
not yet hung on the white mantle with care.
Few days remain as the holiday draws near
questioning if St. Nicholas will ever get here.
Now-grown child no longer in the nest, snug
with visions of sugar-plums cutting a rug.
Though I wear no 'kerchief, he does don a cap.
For each, it is rare to get a long winter's nap.

Suddenly, from the nightstand
there arises such a clatter
Tearing open the covers
(but leaving down the sash)
I stumble out of bed
clearly knowing what‘s the matter.
Away to the snooze button
my fingers fly in a flash.

Its fullness coming, eight more days to go
the waxing moon over no new-fallen snow
gives little lustre to gray objects below.
So, down the steep stairs, I slowly descend
with still-sleepy eyes, praying not to end up on end.

When, what to my wondering eyes should appear
but the white-lighted tree decorated with
a miniature sleigh, and eight tiny reindeer,
With a little old driver, so lively and quick,
It could be no other than beloved St. Nick.

I sit by the still fireplace, with chimney intact
ponder how Santa makes it down with his pack.
Then, from my computer I hear a loud ping.
With eye-light twinkle, I ignore the rude thing
brew myself a warm cup of Earl Grey tea.
Take a few minutes more, especially for me.
Heart, in delight, starts to fill up with glee
all the while, sadly, both heart and mind know
’t’will be yet another year of wasted mistletoe.

More rapid than coursers, nay, eagles the work-day, it came
So, I grumble and shout, and call out a few names.
The bags that I’m getting, not filled up with toys,
come from long hours at work frequently toiled.
They don’t sit quietly under the tree but inhabit my face
and act as if they owned the whole visage place
eliciting shouts to the top of the porch, the wall
Now dash away! dash away! dash away all!"

As dry leaves that before the wild hurricane fly,
When they meet with an obstacle, mount to the sky,
I rush back upstairs, wash face, brush teeth
and prepare for this new day and people to me.
knowing another long day over work will spread
I speak not a word, but head straight there, instead.

Then, you can hear me exclaim, ere I drive away,
"Blessed Season to all, and to all a good-day."
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Dec 2012
About this poem:
Inspired by "Twas the Night before Christmas" generally attributed to Clement Clarke Moore, although the claim has also been made that it was written by Henry Livingston, Jr..

The words in italics are from the original.

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Comments (8)

Fellsman
A delightful Christmas feast and no mistake, seasonal metaphor and offbeat humour make this a treat for the reader.

Best wishes

Bill gift wine
niah9
a war and peace christmas poem......wonderful write gnj.....one to cherish for years.....Kathyteddybear
cafetwo2010
A marvelous seasonal poem dear and so
well written. You've given us an inside look
at the unique lady you are..
Ladybee42
That's a xmas poem for sure Joy - a really interesting idea too. I guess the dashing away is always pertinent to our lives for what ever reason, nowadays it being all the rushing around before xmas as much as the idea of the reindeer racing across the sky!

thumbs up gingerbread gingerbread gingerbread
Yankee4you
Joy -- I like your rendition of this classic Christmas tale.....especially the Earl Grey...I like mix my own loose Earl Grey tea with a little nettles and some lemon grass and just a pinch of that delicious Rooibus red tea from S. Africa....to make a pure electic brew......delizioso...

dancing
Poetnumber1
Masterfully written,what a soothing readdancing wine
hedistuff
what an amazing dear woman you are old friend. you know, there are many bookends in my life on this medium. I can always lean on them and they always keep me from falling. in this vast cyber journey through endless pitfalls and minefields lies at least a small number of oases. as one travels on, the neverending deafening onslaught of mayhem soon overwhelms and far too often forces one to be engulfed by the tide of mass discord. occasionally, if one be fortunate, and perhaps be as their cup of earl grey tea, a respite, a slowing down that might allow a moment of visual clarity and far fewer cacophonous seas of obstruction, has been stumbled upon and given refuge to what I, for the most part, believe to be a lucky number of people that have been given the gift of thought. this brief air of freedom somewhat enables many to gain better sight of grey area nuance which brings about a deeper, perhaps more accurate understanding as to why we as mere humans may do as we do. it's all a big crapshoot anyhoo but if this is all there is to be available to us in our limited capacity, then, of course I choose to be amidst loving hearts and minds of people like you, Joy. your name suits you so well...merry christmas
gnj4u
Hi, Fellsman, Delighted I am to hear that you appreciated the humour of my post. Hi, niah9, "one to cherish for years" is a comment I will cherish for years. Hi, cafetwo2010, That you found my post "A marvelous seasonal poem" gives me pleasure. That you can relate to me as a poet-person gives me even more. Hi, Ladybee42, Although it's the everyday stress that gets a bit much, I love the hustle and bustle of Christmas, the gatherings and parties, and the spiritual promise of the season. Hi, Yankee4you, I am delighted you enjoyed my rendition of "Twas the Night Before..." Now, with the exact measurements of each ingredient, we could perhaps enjoy your recipe for your Earl-Grey blend. Hi, Poetnumber1, That another could make a "Masterfully written...soothing read" comment about my poetry does provide me with much-needed encouragement. Hi, hedistuff, I related to your words about finding support through communion with others through our writings, whether in celebration or in struggle with the world, as we know it and how we hope it could be. Never thought I would love being called "old" but when it is wrapped up with your comment, I am truly honored. To each of you, including those who read but do not comment, I wish you a Merry Christmas and all the Blessings of the Season! May we hold each other in our hearts with tenderness, love and more than a little bit of forgiveness and mercy.
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