Corner Poem
Words succinctly remind us tonight
it is, after all, a no-cost dating site
no more, and certainly, no less
on this defense my argument will rest.
This much, too, I must, dutifully, confess
It is not Forums, nor Blogs to address
nor Videos viewed, nor Games played
not Flowerbox planted nor Photos displayed
nor eCards or Mailbox to receive or to send
or Polls to take or Groups to jump in
No Articles of import inserted to share
nor Online Now to see who is there.
Not one of the Tags, colored, small, large
that shout how different or alike we each are
Nor a post or review of one’s favorite CD
Music categorized for enjoyment by you, by me.
Nor one of the 248 pages of Movies, so far, shared
to see what others watch and get to know who cared.
Nor your favorite Books list complete with fans
where The Secret reigns, so at the top it lands.
But rather Poetry, a corner where poets reside
to share with the reader what lives and dies inside
that pours onto paper from the sweat of the pen
risks being judged “mediocre”, beginning to end
thoughts, hopes, ideas, what appears in vivid dreams
captured in rhyming or un-rhyming verse that streams
byte-by-byte through the internet ether, with hope on wing
to resonate, a tear or smile to each reader might bring.
As words succinctly remind us tonight
we’re connected through this no-cost site
so, by now you can, in good humor, guess,
my “mediocre” poem finds a quiet place to rest.
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Posted: Jun 2013
About this poem:
Inspired by Macduff5's "No Birds Sing"
Comments (18)
It's evident you put your heart and soul into this one.
There is nothing mediocre in this erudite excursion through the pros and cons of Connecting Singles. I guess there are few on this site who do NOT enjoy reading your insightful thoughts and opinions.
Splendid rhyming...
Kindest regards
Bill
Well I've achieved something. I've inspired you. You know I wrote a completely mediocre "whacko" poem a long time back and you were the only one brave enough to comment. That my dear lady was a connection. If I don't get around to all of yours forgive me. I hope things are well for you.
coz this is where i call home
and you are my family also
from me,you and everyone too
And i agree the poets corner is the most peaceful and beautiful part,
It feels like home to me too
I loved reading your wonderful poem,a beautiful corner it is indeed.
Thank you for sharing
Martinaxxx
It is due to wonderful contributors such as the two of you who give freely of your time and talents to post works and comment on the posts of others that make Poet's Corner a unique and welcoming place within CS for each of us who aspire to be poets. It pleases me that you enjoyed my poem. For your time and attention to reading my offering and sharing your reaction to it, I am most grateful. Thank you.
goodness , I don't know how I missed this one ! apologies
this is wonderful !
Thankyou so much for sharing this with us
No apologies are necessary. It is always encouraging when a Reader takes the time to leave a comment. I am pleased to know that you enjoyed reading my poetic offering. Thank you.
to share with the reader what lives and dies inside
that pours onto paper from the sweat of the pen
risks being judged “mediocre”, beginning to end
Amazing well thought out poem gnj, very true words indeed. We sure risk being judged, how boring life would be if we did not take risks.
Though we must risk being judged in order to truly be alive, it is, nevertheless, painful when one is harshly judged. I am pleased, might I say relieved, that you judged my poem favourably. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.