Chocolate Dark

Creamy, sensuous, gently caress
Held to lips, true blessedness.
Only you possess key to this happy heart
Contained in passion’s hands, from very start.
Only your sweet kisses will forever do
Lover of mine, melting me into you.
Angels, surely, smiled down on me.
Tantalizing is the texture of thee.
Every fiber of my being desirous of you

Dripping juices delectably divine.
All olfactory senses you do stimulate
Rich and dark, satisfying taste sublime.
Know, thankful am I for this sweetest fate.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jul 2013
About this poem:
in response to soulgoddess' challenge

edits performed

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Comments (15)

beautifulyou
Nice job Joy!

And some wonder why at times women might prefer chocolate laugh


cheering C-H-O-C-O-L-A-T-E!! C-H-O-C-O-L-A-T-E!!
shadow1950
super poem Joy love the flow teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
orientalkoru
I told you you made me fell in love again...with a tall, dark and handsomely packaged dark choc rolling on the floor laughing ...this is an awesome write Joy... love the Every fiber of my being desirous of you and then Dripping juices so creamily divine...rich and dark, satisfying sublime... what a treat!teddybear applause gift
niah9online today!
Great write as always.......just what we all need.....Kathydancing
rapturecapture
Hi gnj4u

You capture pure love in this amazing write...
Loved reading your wonderful thoughts...Stunning

Martina xxxteddybear hug heart wings angel angel wave
Odette67

Dripping juices so creamily divine
All olfactory senses you do stimulate
Rich and dark, satisfying taste sublime
Know, thankful am I for this sweetest fate.


Delightful,sensual poem gnj. hug purple heart
gnj4u
Hi, beautifulyou, shadow1950, orientalkoru, niah9, ladyjewel, rapturecapture, Odette67,
Your kind words about my poem are, to me, like chocolate - almost (and, based on your comments, I trust you understand). It is nice to share poetry, as well as a love of chocolate, with each of you generous women. Hi, orientalkoru, It was your lovely acrostic poem that alerted me to soulgoddess' challenge and inspired me to participate. Thank you. To All, Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. It is most appreciated.
Fellsman
Hi gnj

A delightful acrostic, if I was a chocolate lover, I'm sure I'd be drooling over this...

Kindest regards

Bill wine
gnj4u
Hi, Fellsman,
Thanks for taking the time to read and leave your "delightful acrostic" comment. It is much appreciated. Chocolate lover or not, I'm disappointed, however, that you did not find my poem drool worthy. I'll have to re-examine the ingredients to see what is missing.
Serenity4two
some say chocolate is an aphrodisiac heart wings
goodness this is a marvellous poem describing so deliciously , the taste and effect this sweet confection has !
Wonderful gnj4u ! well done you ! Warm regards --Fiona hug
gnj4u
Hi, Serenity4two,
Thank you for taking the time to read and leave such a lovely comment. Knowing that you found delicious enjoyment in my poem delights me.
Earlgreytea
phew!!! i need a cold shower now, lol..., lovely write..., thanks for sharing...
love and light...
CelticPoet12
This IS delightful!~ Truly and now I must go have chocolate anything. LOVE the dark chocolate and how you teased here. Must have some. MUST, lol. Hugs, Celtic
darkhorse555
sweet and very beautifully penned piece dear friendangel
trurorob
Divine Acrostic Joy.
Rob
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