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Haiku Challenge

Bombs blow up children
rendering our futures grim.
Love-grown peace yields hope.
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Posted: Aug 2014
About this poem:
Written in response to darkhorse555's 5-7-5 challenge.

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darkhorse555
so very beautifully put peace of love is always the guiding light excellent vision joyangel peace
Fellsman
Dear Joy

Though I am ill qualified to judge the technical merits of the haiku form, there can be no doubting the sheer potency of the message conveyed in those three short lines. You speak so eloquently for every right thinking person on the planet. To write so powerfully and yet with such brevity is simply masterful.

Kindest regards

Bill wine
Mizzy4online today!
Beautifully written Joy,
You've captured a multitude
in this compacted verse.....
Hope for all !

Regards Mick.


angel hug
niah9online today!
The message couldn't be clearer, by use of limited words....Kteddybear
paloma66
A powerful haihu that carries a real good message of a hope that nurtured by love & peace can help us through a otherwise grim future.You say in short but with such impact.We pray for the children who barley get to know life.angel purple heart
socrates44online today!
Very powerful message!
No children! No future adults!
May True Peace prevail always!!
candykid
Joy.....such truth....thumbs up purple heart
Odette67
Bombs blow up children
rendering our futures grim.
Love-grown peace yields hope.


Superb Haiku Joy, says so very much in so few words. I dread to think what this world will be like when my Grand kids are my age. angel purple heart
Girlygirl196349
Awesome poem teddybear
orientalkoru
"Love-grown peace yields hope."

powerful Haiku Joy! teddybear thumbs up angel
Happygolucky4uonline today!
Inspirational! Very well done! bouquet
Poetnumber1
I love the fact that it is structured and you were able to convey your message in an inspirational way in just three lines Gnj. Nicely done. Enjoyed this.
nazimhussain
bombs are blowing on children in Afghanistan
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