by gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts, USA
Aug 2014 680 Views 11 comments
Haiku Challenge
Bombs blow up children
rendering our futures grim.
Love-grown peace yields hope.
rendering our futures grim.
Love-grown peace yields hope.
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Posted: Aug 2014
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Comments (11)
Though I am ill qualified to judge the technical merits of the haiku form, there can be no doubting the sheer potency of the message conveyed in those three short lines. You speak so eloquently for every right thinking person on the planet. To write so powerfully and yet with such brevity is simply masterful.
Kindest regards
Bill
You've captured a multitude
in this compacted verse.....
Hope for all !
Regards Mick.
No children! No future adults!
May True Peace prevail always!!
powerful Haiku Joy!