How much more can I stand

Four grey walls surround me,
closing me in,
taking my breath away.

Sweat breaks out on my forehead,
my palms starting to feel clammy,
and I think that I am going to vomit.

Desperately I try to control myself.
I don't think that I can stand this much longer.
My mind screams at me 'get out of here,'
but the closed walls do not allow this.

Thankfully I hear 'fifth floor - Ladies wear,'
and the door opens.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jan 2013
About this poem:
Maybe a bit of humour mixed in there

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Poetnumber1
Brilliant Steve!I hope the ladies wear section is not a habitrolling on the floor laughing All the best friendcheers
cherryreggae
Lol...really enjoyed this read lil suspenseful, until the elevator opens rolling on the floor laughing cool writeapplause applause
orientalkoru
Oh Steve...you and your sense of humour... what a laugh...what a way to start the day he he he! thumbs up yay rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing As MM stated...hope this is not your favorite hobby scold dancing
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