Reawoken

steve1223

by steve1223adelaide, South Australia

Jan 2013 404 Views 6 comments

Reawoken

Author: steve1223

There
was a
time I would
not cry, nor would
I love, I was dead
inside, dry and shrivelled.
this was before I met you
you who changed my life and brought me
out of this darkness, gave me reason
once more to hope and live, find love again

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Jan 2013

About this poem:

an etheree....one syllable...then 2....on up to 10 ....ten lines...55 syllables total....should look pyramidish....

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Comments (6)

Skymore

SkymoreRiga, LatviaJan 28, 2013

Yes, it looks like a pyramid ... yet surviving the content.
I also like experimenting with form .

Ladybee42

Ladybee42East Liverpool, Ohio USAJan 28, 2013

Was doing a quick fly by as I'm off to the states tomorrow! I saw this and had a peek - it's a pyramid and it's more than a pyramid it's a lovely poem indeed. Often when these shape poems are attempted the content is compromised for the shape. I see no compromise here Steve, I see a lovely poem and I enjoyed the read.

LadyMorgana60

LadyMorgana60Norwich, Norfolk, England UKJan 28, 2013

Excellent pyramid shape poem Steve with a wonderful foundation of hope & love..thanks for sharing.

cherryreggae

cherryreggaebayside, New York USAJan 28, 2013

Very cool pyramid, Steve &.a very lovely poem thanks4 sharing!!!

Poetnumber1

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoJan 29, 2013

This is an interesting style that is executed comely.Nice to see you posting my friend.Cheers

steve1223

steve1223OPadelaide, South Australia AustraliaJan 29, 2013

Thank you all for your comments ... an etheree is a style I am not used to so this was my first attempt

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