distracted........

looking down ............fingers dancing
no chance .............of eyes romancing
focused on.............. what your doing
totally committed ..to what your viewing
a nod a wink and.... even a word i'd say
if you gazed your eyes ......upon my way
but in your world.......... you only see
how broad.......... is your connectivity
lost you are........... in your surround
lost you are ............to whats around
the warmth.......... of a generous smile
a nod and ............a hello worthwhile
simple pleasures................ i adore
always new .................never a bore
open your eyes...... and then your heart
let the world in....... for you to start
to see life.............. in every shape
colourblind........... and an open plate.........
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jun 2013
About this poem:
every where i go i see people looking down at their phones and such....

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beautifulyou
While modes of tech can bring us together, it often seems it can be used to create distance between us and hamper direct, meaningful communication. We seem to be so electronically connected we risk losing total touch with one another if not aware and mindful.

This is an excellent write Nuwahri61...
it's flow and substance rose
Nuwahri61
So true BeautifulYou .........thanks for the kind words very much appreciated
Regards Nu grin
Nuwahri61
Just thought of reposting this as this multiplied tenfold ha ha ........ regards Nu
morgen90210
Its so true
Nowadays i seldom use my phone
Too tired from work
Must be the darn medications

Take care Nuhawk
Send my regards to Kathy
peace j
LaceyQueen21
Glad you brought this one up Nuwahri thumbs up
Great pace and energy.. and hits on a great point.
wine
Nuwahri61
Hey Morgen ...:yeah bud everybody is doing it .... good to hear from you ...... will pass on your wishes ..... take care . Regards Nu :grin
Nuwahri61
Thanks Lacey ...... When I first wrote this it was only minor now it is big time ...... it’s a wonder more people haven’t been hurt by this he he ..... thanks for stopping by . Regards Nugrin
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