looking down ............fingers dancing no chance .............of eyes romancing focused on.............. what your doing totally committed ..to what your viewing a nod a wink and.... even a word i'd say if you gazed your eyes ......upon my way but in your world.......... you only see how broad.......... is your connectivity lost you are........... in your surround lost you are ............to whats around the warmth.......... of a generous smile a nod and ............a hello worthwhile simple pleasures................ i adore always new .................never a bore open your eyes...... and then your heart let the world in....... for you to start to see life.............. in every shape colourblind........... and an open plate.........
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Posted: Jun 2013
About this poem:
every where i go i see people looking down at their phones and such....
While modes of tech can bring us together, it often seems it can be used to create distance between us and hamper direct, meaningful communication. We seem to be so electronically connected we risk losing total touch with one another if not aware and mindful.
This is an excellent write Nuwahri61... it's flow and substance
Thanks Lacey ...... When I first wrote this it was only minor now it is big time ...... it’s a wonder more people haven’t been hurt by this he he ..... thanks for stopping by . Regards Nu
Comments (7)
This is an excellent write Nuwahri61...
it's flow and substance
Regards Nu
Nowadays i seldom use my phone
Too tired from work
Must be the darn medications
Take care Nuhawk
Send my regards to Kathy
j
Great pace and energy.. and hits on a great point.