cool change

the blue sky rumbles with intent as darkness
invades the steamy hot summer's day
large drops tap gently on the roof
slowly ......purposely but teasingly
the humidity is soothed to a cool freshness
tempering my mood to follow
as the earth lays in wait
aching to be bathed
my senses dance with delight
embracing the change
its long overdue an eagerness
lies etched in the faces of many
dark clouds have threatened before
and have passed by without cause
flashes of colour emit from the sky
fuelling hope as i eagerly wait
for the tempo to speed up
waiting forever waiting
anticipating i ponder
how beautiful it is before
it finally rains..........
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Nov 2013
About this poem:
enjoying the lead up to the first of springs rain .......its been a long dry winter and spring

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trurorob
Yeah I love a good storm, especially with high winds, not destructive mind you. Nicely written poem.
Rob
Poetnumber1
Being in a tropical climate we don't have the very cold weather of winter. But the rains are always welcomed as it brings new birth to the land. I like how you constructed this one Nu :). Nicely crafted!cheers
sundayrose1
Nu and Kathy, this is beautiful..Of course your weather is very similar from ours in Hawaii and I can relate to it..

Take care

SRbouquet gift
mcradloff
We are in the later part of fall here with winter about 34 days away. We did have some snow last week that lasted about three days. Today it is raining on and off with a Bears game in Chicago delayed due to severe storms.snowglobe chicken
Nuwahri61
Hi Rob ........yeah i am the same ........thanks for your comments ....regards Nucheers
Nuwahri61
Hi Poet ......yeah mate we are very similar in climates ....this season has been exceptionally dry though and everyone has been hanging out for some rain......glad you liked it ........regards Nucheers
Nuwahri61
Hi Sundayrose .......thanks for your lovely comments ........much appreciated ....regards Nu grin
Nuwahri61
Thanks MC ..you are on the opposite end of the seasons to us .......the snow sounds cool ......thanks for commenting regards Nu
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