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Nov 2013 696 Views 32 comments

wind and rain (Wayne's words challenge)

Author: Unknown
Feeling your spirit
In the wind and rain
Consoling
My pains
In your absence.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Nov 2013
About this poem:
Thank you for this challenge. It truly is inspiring to beat the mind on creating a thought expressed in just a few words...

Thank you all for your reads.

SR

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Comments (32)

darkhorse555
darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandNov 21, 2013
howling beautiful pieceangel
Serenity4two
Serenity4twoDonegal, IrelandNov 21, 2013
A definition of true love , and the pain felt by the loved one's "absence "-all summed up in just 14 words !
Truly amazing SR !excellent hug
wayne34
wayne34liverpool, Merseyside, England UKNov 21, 2013
Cool write works so wellteddybear
mimzy333
mimzy333unknown, Washington USANov 21, 2013
flowes very well, i like it very much
socrates44online today!
socrates44San Fernando, Trinidad and TobagoNov 21, 2013
Hi sundayrose

I love the flow and movement of your poem linking your emotions with the elements of Nature. It says so much in a few words similar to a Haiku. Very Well Composed!
Have a nice day!
Ziusudra
ZiusudraHernando, Florida USANov 21, 2013
Winds of love
flow above
Dancing trees
gentle rain
prayers to ease
the pain.

I wonder will this do for a 14 word challenge?
sundayrose1
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USANov 22, 2013
Thanks Liam,

Always truly appreciate your comments.

SR
sundayrose1
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USANov 22, 2013
Fiona,

Your visit and comments always bring smile on my face and thank you so much.

SRteddybear teddybear
sundayrose1
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USANov 22, 2013
Thanks Wayne for initiating the challenge.

Amazing how we can pack so much emotions in such a limited words. It speaks volumes on how we all want to be heard and understood...

My pleasure for your visit.

Thanks,

SRbouquet
sundayrose1
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USANov 22, 2013
Cameal,

My dear friend. Your's has deeply touched me..You know too well, how to express the pains of what we have gone through.

Take care my friend,

SRbouquet bouquet bouquet teddybear teddybear teddybear gift gift gift
beautifulyou
beautifulyouNew York, USANov 22, 2013
love this SR...
'Consoling
My pains
In your absence'

very very nice, gift
sundayrose1
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USANov 22, 2013
I wanted to clarify the names: Dr. De Grasse Tyson and Dr. Richard Dawkins, anybody who is interested on their concept of POETRY IN SCIENCE.

Thanks again.

SR
weemick1960
weemick1960Fife, Scotland UKNov 22, 2013
Hi SR, once again i am in awe, the way you can encompasse your thoughts into so few words and it makes perfect sense. Like i said, it takes me twenty words to say hello. Well done on this well written piece. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend....MIKE.
sundayrose1
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USANov 22, 2013
winds of love
flow above
Dancing trees
gentle rain
prayers to ease
the pain.

I wonder will this do for a 14 word challenge?

Of course my dear fellow poet. In fact this is one of the most profound that I have read in this pithy and concise creation yet speaks so much volumes.

Thank you so much for your share. PRAYERS TO EASE THE PAIN... sometimes life is beset on so much sufferings and pain and yes prayers is all we can do to alleviate it.

Thanks again,

SRbouquet bouquet
Poetnumber1
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoNov 22, 2013
This has to be among with the best I've read so far. Nicely penned within the Fourteen word limit.
Yankee4youonline today!
Yankee4youSt. Albans, Vermont USANov 22, 2013
Nice hug
shadow1950
shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England UKNov 22, 2013
hi SR delightful well expressed wine kiss hug
Odette67
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKNov 23, 2013
Feeling your spirit
In the wind and rain
Consoling
My pains
In your absence.

This just lovely SR. purple heart
sundayrose1
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USANov 23, 2013
Thanks so much beautiful yiu
sundayrose1
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USANov 23, 2013
Mike my great appreciation for all your comments

Thanks

SR
nonsmoker
nonsmokerWaterford, IrelandNov 23, 2013
nicely done thumbs up
sundayrose1
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USANov 23, 2013
M my friend,

Thanks for your visit and your input on my writes.

Truly appreciate..bouquet gift

SR
sundayrose1
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USANov 23, 2013
Yankee,

your visit and read is highly appreciated.

SRgift bouquet
sundayrose1
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USANov 23, 2013
Linda,

Thanks so much. Your writes are equally compelling and captivating.

Thanks again...

SRbouquet teddybear gift
sundayrose1
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USANov 23, 2013
Odette, my dearest lady. Thank you so much for your visit and comments

SRbouquet
IvoryPetals
IvoryPetalsArima, Borough of Arima Trinidad and TobagoNov 23, 2013
applause
nice write!
keep them coming!
sundayrose1
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USANov 24, 2013
Non smoker, Thanks so much for your visit. I appreciate.

SRbouquet
sundayrose1
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USANov 24, 2013
Ivorypetals,

I thank you for your comment. Thanks for your visit.

SRbouquet
rapturecapture
rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandNov 24, 2013
Hi Sundayrose

No pain no gain...
But consolation is, the pain is now the pleasure.
We weather the storm...because the outcome is... survival of the brave of heart and mind...dunno hug

Loved reading, wind and rain

Martina xxxbouquet hug angel wave
sundayrose1
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USANov 24, 2013
Martina, my dearest fellow poet, thanks always for your warm contribution on my write.

Always,

SRbouquet teddybear
soulgoddess
soulgoddessTokyo, Kanto JapanNov 24, 2013
I definitely agree that it's an inspiring style to stimulate the mind.... Thanks for commenting on my poetry too! Have a wonderful dayhug danceline
sundayrose1
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USANov 25, 2013
Thank you so much SG and yes I have brushed up on some of your writes and they are indeed a very great testament of Nature and its beauty.,..

Thanks for your visit, as well.

SRbouquet bouquet teddybear teddybear gift gift
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