by steve1223adelaide, South Australia
Feb 2014 500 Views 8 comments
Trapped
Total silence, there are no sounds
All around blackness abounds
Where am I? I do not know
As I lay here time moves so slow
I cannot move, I think I’m dead
The thought of this fills me with dread
For all eternity here I will lay
And slowly rot into decay
And then the sun brings morning again
I remember, I am trapped, here in my brain
All around blackness abounds
Where am I? I do not know
As I lay here time moves so slow
I cannot move, I think I’m dead
The thought of this fills me with dread
For all eternity here I will lay
And slowly rot into decay
And then the sun brings morning again
I remember, I am trapped, here in my brain
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Posted: Feb 2014
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Comments (8)
You described very well, what exactly I felt, one time so long ago, in the surgery room.
You most be experienced it in someway! If not, how you can express in words it this way?
I know, our mind and imagination can do and go things, sometimes impossible for others.
Congratulations for your very well written.
Hug and Blessings
Stell
thanks for the read.
Phyllis
You are so right. I work with the elderly you are so imaginary and creative. Thank you ADDY
Congratulations for a very good poem, with much subliminal depth.
Phil.