Serene she appears on outward glance, I've seen her lost in frozen stare, Past demons strain her countenance, A hurt so deep...her heart not there. That surface I probed with warm caress, While in retreat her anger vent, Lest I usurp forbidden distress, No hardened sledge could ever dent. Episodic flashbacks of lonely grief, A young girls teardrops long since dried, Her childhood stolen by demonic thief, Tears lost in exile....yearning to be cried !
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Posted: Feb 2014
About this poem:
My 2nd recent poem on a sad subject.... In recognition for someone who can't face Valentines....or men.
Mick!...this is a wonderfully introspective piece! I know this cannot be the dark joke you were referring to This is "Beautiful", yes dark, but certainly not a joke! I must have missed it again! Going to check it out! Great Poem Mick! Robert
This is all I see you have posted within the last 23 hours...so, I guess this is the poem you referred to! I tell you the truth Mick, "I didn't even see it until you mentioned it!...must be that way for the others, for there is absolutely nothing "NOT TO LIKE" about this poem! I Love It! I am sure the others will find it...and love it too! Hahahaha ...just kidding Mick! Robert
Comments (13)
I know this cannot be the dark joke you were referring to
This is "Beautiful", yes dark, but certainly not a joke!
I must have missed it again!
Going to check it out!
Great Poem Mick!
Robert
I tell you the truth Mick, "I didn't even see it until you mentioned it!...must be that way for the others, for there is
absolutely nothing "NOT TO LIKE" about this poem!
I Love It!
I am sure the others will find it...and love it too!
Hahahaha ...just kidding Mick!
Robert
I said dark poem ....not joke.
I appreciate your kind remarks. Mick
Much appreciated as always ! Mick.
The sad ones need to be written too
though not nice to read.
Mick.
Although addressed to Steve.
Cheers anyway
Not only are you a great poet
You also construct great comments!
Very close to home....this one!
Mick.