by Mizzy4Navan, Meath, Ireland
Mar 2014 459 Views 12 comments
Masquerade Challenge. ( Tanka )
Masks irrelevant,
I knew your pouting red lips,
You noticed my stare,
We danced, we kissed, and we knew,
The night would reveal us bare.
I knew your pouting red lips,
You noticed my stare,
We danced, we kissed, and we knew,
The night would reveal us bare.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Mar 2014
About this poem:
This is dedicated to the Lovely Odette,Without whom I would not have had
the confidence to chance erotic verse.
Yes Josephine, we will have this dance.
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Comments (12)
I knew your pouting red lips,
You noticed my stare,
We danced, we kissed, and we knew,
The night would reveal us bare.
WOW!!!! Mick, this is so,so very beautiful and romantic, I'm in awe. I'm so happy that little old humble me, could inspire you. You my dear friend can go from strenth to strenth, never be afraid to write what you feel. Hemmingway said - "A writer must always tell the truth".
Thanks for your feedback ! Mick.
Mick..........
An excellent piece of work in Tanka!
Thanks for coming to the Masquerade Ballroom party!
Enjoy your food and wine with your loved ones while you are there!
and for the challenge !
Stunning...really lovely
Martinaxxx
There was fun on the corner
for a few days.......some of the
comments were class.
Mick.
The reply was the least I could do.
I've actually read mine also,
Mick.........I mean yours.....
Oh you just know.