going going gone.................cafetwo challenge

the time has come to say goodbye
the end is near no wonder why
i smoked and drank till i was blue
a different time and point of view
i've seen the beauty of this land
the sparkling sea and golden sand
felt the warmth of a woman's love
set it free on wings of dove
watched my sons enter this life
watched them grow and seek out strife
learned what friends meant to me
a lesson to late for me to be
felt the hate of an angry man
felt the love of gentle hand
seen dispise in peoples eyes
learned of colour and its disguise
walked a road of no end
slept on tiles to understand then
every journey i've made or undertook
revealed a beauty which made me look
deeper into all i see
allowing me a full life you see......
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Apr 2014
About this poem:
hope you don't mind me jumping in on this challenge Cafte..........

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Comments (18)

Mizzy4
Special write Nu !
Great entry !
Mick


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cafetwo2010
Wow! This is a very special poem. You've
shared a unique personal jourñey which
will surely capture the imagination of
many. Thank you friend.
candykid
Outstanding last poem!.......Super entry......
Nuwahri61
Hi Mick Thanks for your thoughts very much appreciated.......Regards Nucheers
Nuwahri61
Hi Cafetwo........Thanks for the generous remarks and the opportunity ..........after reading your challenge i just felt compelled to write this ...........Regards Nugrin cool
Nuwahri61
Hi Candy Kid .........Nice to meet you here.......and thanks for your kind words .....Regards Nugrin cool
darkhorse555
top notch beautifully penned excellent write loved it angel grin
darkhorse555
top notch beautifully penned excellent write loved it angel grin
Poetnumber1
Great poem Nu. It was a pleasure to read.
Nuwahri61
Thanks Darkhorse........appreciate your comments mate ....Regards Nucheers
Nuwahri61
Hi Poet ...Thanks mate good to hear from you.......hope all is well ...regards Nucheers cool
beautifulyou
'every journey i've made or undertook
revealed a beauty which made me look
deeper... '


that's beautifully expressed Nu flower
Nuwahri61
Hi BY.......Thanks for your lovely thoughts ....Regards Nucool
123whisper
Truly beautifly expresed thumbs up
Nuwahri61
Hi Whsiper ...nice to meet you here and thanks for your thoughts ...Regards Nugrin
trurorob
Nice one Nu, enjoyed the read on a life's journey.
Rob
Nuwahri61
Hi Marikia........Thanks for your lovely thoughts very much appreciated ....regards Nu
Nuwahri61
Hi Rob.......Thanks mate for your comments...hope all is well in your part of the world.......regards Nucool
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