Redemption Poem

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We marched on through the valleys in the name of democracy
I laid many soldiers to rest and may they always find peace
In fear we battled armored legions of blood thirsty men
And when I think of their families it always brings me sadness
As I wonder who is my enemy when in war we are bound to protect
But in this great devotion of freedom we also seem to neglect
Humanity and compassion isn't there any left inside of me
Because my better parts I cannot find only whats broken and beat
Sleepless nights I sit beside my silence filled with sorrows over again
Then by the light of my Almighty God, He gave me a mighty pen
And on empty canvas my heart pours out
then from my eyes the ink smears
How many nights have I wasted justifying those fleeting tears
Then I brought my feelings to this corner and to my recollect
I expressed how I felt and in return good people Ive met
I read from a hundred poets and I absorbed every word
Slowly we reach our destination sometimes we're thrown a curve
Some lightly write with humor and some write from true romance
Some write from within darkness, but in the end there's a beautiful chance
That in this world we are not alone or maybe there is something worse
But surely we are all connected by our souls in this vast universe
"Emancipate yourselves from mental slavery
None but ourselves can free our mind"
Have no fear of negative energy, because negativity won't stop the time
Write whatever your heart desires it doesn't matter if it rhymes
Encourage one another and together we'll ascend to new heights
"So wont you help me write
These words of freedom
'Cause all I ever had
Are these redemption poems"
These words are freedom
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Posted: May 2014
About this poem:
Today Im taking an easy breezy day off in pineapple fields strumming my Melody then I started singing a poem I was writing with the music of Bob Marley's Redemption Song and this came about Redemption Poem. If you know the music then sing along my friends…Cheers and much love

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lindsyjonesonline today!
These words of freedom
'Cause all I ever had
Are these redemption poems"


Looks like we are treading the same road my dearest loved WCB.

Take care my brother..
beautifulyou
'As I wonder who is my enemy when in war we are bound to protect
But in this great devotion of freedom we also seem to neglect
Humanity and compassion ..'


what flows from your soul is so, so beautiful jesse.
i remember one of the first posting i saw of yours here... it was a sharing about the anguish of war and its aftermath, within you.

you consciously move into the realm of your experience and that is so courageous and, i give reverence to that, and you rose
fjamesj9701
Thank you My Dearest WCS, much love and you know my heart is where you stand. Thank you for your visits always my pleasure. MaHal Kita…Jessewine teddybear
fjamesj9701
Well Miss always BeautifulYou I think you stirred a tear within me . That is the nicest thing I could of been told today my dear. Thank you and thank you for remembering. Always my pleasure to receive a visit from you. Much love always…Jessewine teddybear
123whisper
Mr Jessy;your poems takes my breath away -and I am not yet asmatic laugh
Love for humanity lives in these words of freedom that wonderfuly welcomes all poets to join souls in this vast universe,
no matter if it rhymes thumbs up applause
I can faint in your light of poems,wowowo wine
Spartacus2012
Good solid write as usual Mr Jesse..


Kentip hat
Odette67
Some lightly write with humor and some write from true romance
Some write from within darkness, but in the end there's a beautiful chance
That in this world we are not alone or maybe there is something worse
But surely we are all connected by our souls in this vast universe


Dear Jesse, this poem made me cry - so sad - yet so beautyfully written from your heart. Sure we are connected - by an invisible cord - that is why we keep comming back to our little poetry family.God bless you. angel hug purple heart
Odette67
Ps, I am a big, big fan of Bob Marley. thumbs up
fjamesj9701
Very sweet vibe my Dearest Whisper so glad to see you and a pleasure . Many thanks and much love…Jessewine teddybear
fjamesj9701
Mr Sir Ken, I appreciate your visits always my friend. Much love…Jessehandshake
fjamesj9701
Thank you my dear Lady C its always been my pleasure to know you visit and I am glad your here. It would be nice to see us all here. Maybe a poets reunion and to add Bob Marley is legend. Ill be honest your PS was unexpected but all the more we connect. Always a pleasure and much love to youpurple heart
Girlygirl196349
This hurts my heart !! You always write with so much passion sad flower you have much compassion. I wish you never had to experience the things that you have.teddybear Jesse this is so beautifully written I can feel your emotions . Your so right( have no fear of negative energy ) (write whatever your heart desires)Wow ! You always seem to wow me ! teddybear hug balloons balloons rose
Odette67
One good thing about
music, when it hits you,
you feel no pain.

Bob Marley
guitar violin purple heart
fjamesj9701
Aww thank You Miss LGG, nothing happens by chance we all have a purpose greater than ourselves I believe and if anything I gained a higher sense of perception and a strengthened will. I must never forget the past to move forward but letting go is sometimes a harder task. Thank you and much love…Jessewine teddybear
fjamesj9701
My lovely C, such true words. Without music I don't believe their is a voice and Bob Marley my Dear a bright example of love with his music. I admire his strength. In 1976 he was shot some believe an assassination attempt and political views for a peace music convention Smile Jamaica and the very next day he was on stage as a big F u playing his music. Im sure you know this but its always nice to speak of it. For my little purple heart…Jessepurple heart
darkhorse555
powerfully written piece jesse loved it dear friendangel cheers
Redex
Brilliant poems just spring any time any where and this beside pineapples doh well done you and yes bob Marleys tune fits this admirallyteddybear
candykid
Jesse. ....I can always tell that you are in the right state of mind when you write....this is just the kind of positive vibe this corner needs right now.......thumbs up cheers
fjamesj9701
Thank you Mr LDH, always glad to see you stopping by. Thank you again…Jessehandshake
fjamesj9701
laugh Thank you Miss Red and tis a pleasure to see your friendly face…Jessewine
fjamesj9701
Many thanks Mr CK, Im not sure I'm ever in the right mind, I traded that on Mars to an alien name Norg. Much love my friend…Jessetransport
orientalkoru
"Encourage one another and together we'll ascend to new heights
"So wont you help me write
These words of freedom
'Cause all I ever had
Are these redemption poems"




What a lovely write Jesse...you've beautifully captured a universal feeling most of us have...and to sing it and not just read it makes the words stick to mind. Once again brilliant piece...they must be good pineapples in that farm my friend... thumbs up angel
fjamesj9701
Thank you very much my Dear friend OK its always a pleasure and an honor. Oh and yes the finest pineapples ever. Thank you again…Jessewine
Joseph1112
Brother Jesse u have outdone yourself dear friend, splendid write filling the heart with emotion till overflowing, most powerful, this is what the reader longs for, when yr pen touches paper,or fingers the keys tis magical. J applause handshake
Girlygirl196349
HAPPY BIRTHDAY JESSE!!! IM SO HAPPY YOU WERE BORN teddybear balloons cake party hat party balloons cake party hat
Poetnumber1
I could picture why you placed that accompanying picture Skywalker, I guess one needs to go back to their grass roots. laugh Jah raster 4 eye, Silasi Eye. doh
Back to the poem, I thought the substance in your poem was powerful my friend. Thanks once more for the pleasure of this read. handshake
Mizzy4
Another special write Jesse,
One of my favourite songs,
Wishing you a nice birthday also.
Mick.

applause grin
Ondos
How many nights have I wasted justifying those fleeting tears
One skill many of us are experts at, is wasting our life.
Happy birthday!
fjamesj9701
Mr Brother J a most touching comment from you as well my friend. Wow thank you much for the encouragement . Much Love my friend. handshake
fjamesj9701
Thank you so so so much Miss LGG, and a Happy Birthday to you toolaugh J/K, thank you though always…Jesse
fjamesj9701
Thank you Miss Red 29 should sufficegrin
fjamesj9701
I can never pull one over the eyes of a Fellow Jedi . Thank you My Brother for the grass roots is where Ill be always . Much Love OB1….Skywalkercheers
fjamesj9701
Thank you Miss Whisper for a very endearing and encouraging far too kind but will take it commentgrin And we don't want my dreams to come true they could be of cataclysmic proportions
LoL. Much love my dear friend…Jesse
wine teddybear
fjamesj9701
Mr The Mick, thank you dear friend and I told you that you would be backprofessor
fjamesj9701
Thank you Sir Ondos for both comment and the Happy BDay. I agree an expert we can be and often are. Thank you again …Jessehandshake
fjamesj9701
Sir Phil once again you move me. Such wisdom and young we were and scared, but after a while fear became a friend and age was determined by days. Questioning and without answers just ordered. Thank you , always a delightful pleasure…Jessehandshake
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