We marched on through the valleys in the name of democracy
I laid many soldiers to rest and may they always find peace
In fear we battled armored legions of blood thirsty men
And when I think of their families it always brings me sadness
As I wonder who is my enemy when in war we are bound to protect
But in this great devotion of freedom we also seem to neglect
Humanity and compassion isn't there any left inside of me
Because my better parts I cannot find only whats broken and beat
Sleepless nights I sit beside my silence filled with sorrows over again
Then by the light of my Almighty God, He gave me a mighty pen
And on empty canvas my heart pours out
then from my eyes the ink smears
How many nights have I wasted justifying those fleeting tears
Then I brought my feelings to this corner and to my recollect
I expressed how I felt and in return good people Ive met
I read from a hundred poets and I absorbed every word
Slowly we reach our destination sometimes we're thrown a curve
Some lightly write with humor and some write from true romance
Some write from within darkness, but in the end there's a beautiful chance
That in this world we are not alone or maybe there is something worse
But surely we are all connected by our souls in this vast universe
"Emancipate yourselves from mental slavery
None but ourselves can free our mind"
Have no fear of negative energy, because negativity won't stop the time
Write whatever your heart desires it doesn't matter if it rhymes
Encourage one another and together we'll ascend to new heights
"So wont you help me write
These words of freedom
'Cause all I ever had
Are these redemption poems"
These words are freedom
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'Cause all I ever had
Are these redemption poems"
Looks like we are treading the same road my dearest loved WCB.
Take care my brother..
But in this great devotion of freedom we also seem to neglect
Humanity and compassion ..'
what flows from your soul is so, so beautiful jesse.
i remember one of the first posting i saw of yours here... it was a sharing about the anguish of war and its aftermath, within you.
you consciously move into the realm of your experience and that is so courageous and, i give reverence to that, and you
Love for humanity lives in these words of freedom that wonderfuly welcomes all poets to join souls in this vast universe,
no matter if it rhymes
I can faint in your light of poems,wowowo
Ken
Some write from within darkness, but in the end there's a beautiful chance
That in this world we are not alone or maybe there is something worse
But surely we are all connected by our souls in this vast universe
Dear Jesse, this poem made me cry - so sad - yet so beautyfully written from your heart. Sure we are connected - by an invisible cord - that is why we keep comming back to our little poetry family.God bless you.
music, when it hits you,
you feel no pain.
Bob Marley
"So wont you help me write
These words of freedom
'Cause all I ever had
Are these redemption poems"
What a lovely write Jesse...you've beautifully captured a universal feeling most of us have...and to sing it and not just read it makes the words stick to mind. Once again brilliant piece...they must be good pineapples in that farm my friend...
Back to the poem, I thought the substance in your poem was powerful my friend. Thanks once more for the pleasure of this read.
One of my favourite songs,
Wishing you a nice birthday also.
Mick.
One skill many of us are experts at, is wasting our life.
Happy birthday!
LoL. Much love my dear friend…Jesse