Old Man

I again viewed him on the porch rocking slowly.
He seemed immobal and appeared oh so lonely.
The steel grey eyes looking starkly ahead.
If it weren't for the rocking you'd think he was dead.

He thought of his life past as being a mission.
He completed it methodically with minimum transition.
He worked studiously at school and attained a career.
He married his sweetheart and children he reared

Hobbies, work, church and travel he all had.
Work became volunteer and father became grandad.
He helped and mentored and taught and sacrificed.
The days flew buy in his wonderful proud paradise.

Stoically he rocked ceaselessly now left all alone.
His wife had passed on and the children had flown.
His clouded memory vaguely recalled his accomplishments
No one left nearby to appreciate the man and his talents.

I viewed him on the porch rocking slowly.
He seemed immobal and appeared oh so lonely.
The steel grey eyes looking starkly ahead.
I slowly sauntered over to engage conversation instead.
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Posted: Jan 2010
About this poem:
You can oft bring a lot of joy
to the elderly simply by acknowledging
their existence. Take the time they
can be very interesting to talk to.

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trurorob
good poem larry, yes sometimes they are too easily forgotten
rob
jazzy75
boyshchrm - great poem and sentiment :-)applause teddybear peace cheering
NeverEndingStory
Being a care assistant myself I've heard some amazing stories. Outside work and in. Love your poem thank you teddybear
boyshchrm6
Thanks Rob...and remember we will all
be old some day...hopefully.cool angel handshake grin
luvuluvme2
lovely poem, Boychshrm. Thank you.
tip hat thumbs up angel
QuietStormF
Very nice poem..boyshchrm6 ..and you are so right, about learning alot from the elderly.. having worked with them, I know this to be true.,. hug teddybear bouquet
boyshchrm6
Thanks for wonderful
comment Jazzy.cool angel cheers
boyshchrm6
Thanks Neverendingstory. Thank you.angel cool hug
Pinkpoetress
Great poem boyshchrm. I know what you are saying, for I visit with several of the older folks and they have so much wisdom and good stories as well. Thanks for sharing and opening eyes.
boyshchrm6
Thanks for your comments LL2.
boyshchrm6
Thanks for comments Quietstorm.cool angel
boyshchrm6
Thanks for commments PinkPoetress.
Yes a lot of wisdom indeed from
Older people.cool angel thumbs up
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