Angel of Mercy

If only you could have been my angel of mercy
Perhaps perceiving the love waiting dormant there
If only you could have been my angel of mercy
And been patient enough to lend me your ear
If only you could have been my lifebuoy of hope
And could have reached down to rescue me
If only you could have been my lifebouy of hope
With kind thoughtful eyes that really could see
If only you could have been the ladder to save me
One time realizing to toss caution to the wind
If only you could have been the ladder to save me
Looking closer to see what really was within
If only you could have tried harder to understand me
You would have realized how thankful I'd become
If only you could have tried harder to understand me
I bared my soul to you and you left me numb
If only you could have been my angel of mercy
Perhaps perceiving the love waiting dormant there
If only you could have been my angel of mercy
And been patient enough to lend me your ear
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Posted: Feb 2010
About this poem:
In our "instant" society people just won't
take the time to try and understand or calmly
discuss and yet want a "fulfulling" relationship...go figure.

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jerseygirl49
Hello my friend,
Glad to see you here..sad poem, unfortunatly..alot of fallen angels,instead of ones of mercy.Take care and God bless!!!angel wave teddybear sad flower JG
Pinkpoetress
Wonderful poem. It is sad too. I understand what you are saying. I am glad you are back. Can't wait until I can write again. Take care.
Joyfullspirit
Well done - and so sadly true. It would make a wonderful song!
thumbs up thumbs up
justpickone
sad but true
but the truth is we cannot save each other
only be pillars of support to each other while the waves crash all around
angel sad flower
hedistuff
hello friend. I like this.
jazzy75
boyshchrm - heartfelt poem...i enjoyed reading it my friend. take carehug
trurorob
straight from the heart my friend, nice poem
rob
boyshchrm6
People are sometimes too quick to judge.
Everyone makes mistakes...whatever happened
to constructive criticism? Thanks JGirl for
your comments.
cool angel thumbs up dunno cheers
dreamwolf5264
so..so..true!!! our instant society has ruined the true meaning of love,....now when you go on a date,if you don't sound interesting in five minutes...for get about any chance of seeing that person again....what a world!!!....nice poem,keep the peace.cheers
QuietStormF
Nice poem.. but ya know when you depend on someone else for your happiness.. you almost always get let down...In the longrun, I have learned that it is better to get things right within yourself.. and then and only then, will you be able to come to the table with a clean slate (if you will) and be someone who is free to move on and experience a new beginning.. for the both of you... No One person, should ever have to bear the brunt of being an Angel of mercy to anyone.. It's give and take and a whole lot of love,. gets us to that zone.. Good luck my friend,
teddybear: hug bouquet
Quietstorm:
boyshchrm6
gotta respond QS. I see how you could interpret poem that way. Poem embellished. Really all I am saying is I wanted to have an opportunity to explain a mistake I made and to do so in person. Relationships are difficult if people can't take the time to listen in person. We often make snap decisions which are based on the "norm". Each circumstance is unique and often a discussion is warranted to ascertain a person's motives. The whole lady of mercy and rescue thing is terribly overdramatic. I just meant a sincere dialogue would be a breath of fresh air. We really do want everything "instant" and packaged in neat "conforming" packages and life is much more complex than that at times. I had been wrong but even the courts let you plead
guilty with an explanation.I so see and agree with your statements mainly though.
cool angel cheers
QuietStormF
smiles... and yes I know ... you are such a great person Larry// I am sure you're Angel is just around the corner... If you can dream it.. You can achieve it... right5? teddybear

Quietstorm
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