If only you could have been my angel of mercy Perhaps perceiving the love waiting dormant there If only you could have been my angel of mercy And been patient enough to lend me your ear If only you could have been my lifebuoy of hope And could have reached down to rescue me If only you could have been my lifebouy of hope With kind thoughtful eyes that really could see If only you could have been the ladder to save me One time realizing to toss caution to the wind If only you could have been the ladder to save me Looking closer to see what really was within If only you could have tried harder to understand me You would have realized how thankful I'd become If only you could have tried harder to understand me I bared my soul to you and you left me numb If only you could have been my angel of mercy Perhaps perceiving the love waiting dormant there If only you could have been my angel of mercy And been patient enough to lend me your ear
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Posted: Feb 2010
About this poem:
In our "instant" society people just won't take the time to try and understand or calmly discuss and yet want a "fulfulling" relationship...go figure.
People are sometimes too quick to judge. Everyone makes mistakes...whatever happened to constructive criticism? Thanks JGirl for your comments.
dreamwolf5264francestown, New Hampshire USAFeb 23, 2010
so..so..true!!! our instant society has ruined the true meaning of love,....now when you go on a date,if you don't sound interesting in five minutes...for get about any chance of seeing that person again....what a world!!!....nice poem,keep the peace.
Nice poem.. but ya know when you depend on someone else for your happiness.. you almost always get let down...In the longrun, I have learned that it is better to get things right within yourself.. and then and only then, will you be able to come to the table with a clean slate (if you will) and be someone who is free to move on and experience a new beginning.. for the both of you... No One person, should ever have to bear the brunt of being an Angel of mercy to anyone.. It's give and take and a whole lot of love,. gets us to that zone.. Good luck my friend, teddybear: Quietstorm:
gotta respond QS. I see how you could interpret poem that way. Poem embellished. Really all I am saying is I wanted to have an opportunity to explain a mistake I made and to do so in person. Relationships are difficult if people can't take the time to listen in person. We often make snap decisions which are based on the "norm". Each circumstance is unique and often a discussion is warranted to ascertain a person's motives. The whole lady of mercy and rescue thing is terribly overdramatic. I just meant a sincere dialogue would be a breath of fresh air. We really do want everything "instant" and packaged in neat "conforming" packages and life is much more complex than that at times. I had been wrong but even the courts let you plead guilty with an explanation.I so see and agree with your statements mainly though.
smiles... and yes I know ... you are such a great person Larry// I am sure you're Angel is just around the corner... If you can dream it.. You can achieve it... right5?
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Glad to see you here..sad poem, unfortunatly..alot of fallen angels,instead of ones of mercy.Take care and God bless!!! JG
but the truth is we cannot save each other
only be pillars of support to each other while the waves crash all around
rob
Everyone makes mistakes...whatever happened
to constructive criticism? Thanks JGirl for
your comments.
teddybear:
Quietstorm:
guilty with an explanation.I so see and agree with your statements mainly though.
Quietstorm