My Crush

by Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California, USA

Jun 2014 870 Views 41 comments

My Crush

Author: Girlygirl196349

You're young
I'm old
Something's begining to unfold
Your cheerful
I'm tearful
We better be careful
Your mature
I'm imature
We make a beautiful picture
Your dark skinned
I'm light skinned
Baby come in
Your lips are pink
My lips are pale
If kissing were a crime we'd be in jail
You're my moon light
I'm your sun light
Say you'll stay the night
You like to please
I like to tease
Yet we're both at ease
Its Always a treat
when our lips meet
Can you Feel my heart beat
Always remember
How special you are
For you're my shinning star

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Jun 2014

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Comments (41)

Iamagoodgirltampa, Florida USAJun 7, 2014

Sometimes, opposites do attract. Great wording and title.

Mizzy4Navan, Meath IrelandJun 7, 2014

Nicely written Laura,
Sounds hopeful......
Best wishes,
Mick.

123whisperMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaJun 7, 2014

MS LAURA; I AM SO PLEASED TO ENJOY READING YOUR LOVELY VERY HOPEFUL POEM

fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida USAJun 7, 2014

Lovely poem Miss LGG and a pleasure to read. Hopefully this is for someone and not about a fruit or treadmill lol…Muah

candykidAshburn, Virginia USAJun 7, 2014

He will love it! Nice one Girlygirl. ....

nighty70duisburg, Nordrhein-Westfalen GermanyJun 7, 2014

Hey girly you wrote with such magic words great love this poem

Girlygirl196349OPFullerton, California USAJun 7, 2014

Ms goodgirl thank you for your lovely comment

Girlygirl196349OPFullerton, California USAJun 7, 2014

sir mick I hope all s well always love it when you visit thank you for the lovely comment and the well wishes

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainJun 7, 2014

Very nice, flows well, good lines and nice story.
Rob

Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi USAJun 7, 2014

Very nice Laura! Opposites do attract, I would know..lol

Ken

Girlygirl196349OPFullerton, California USAJun 7, 2014

Miss whisper thank you for your lovely comment

Girlygirl196349OPFullerton, California USAJun 7, 2014

My dear Jesse you're to funny hunny bunny no this Poem is not about a piece of fruit or a treadmill

Girlygirl196349OPFullerton, California USAJun 7, 2014

Mr kid thank you very much

nice o see your back

rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandJun 7, 2014

Hi Girly

I can relate to the feeling of "Innocent" worry... in this wonderful write...A Nice Crush...Lovely poem

Thank you for sharing

Martina xxx

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoJun 7, 2014

Lovely poem Laura. Enjoyed reading this one from you.

Girlygirl196349OPFullerton, California USAJun 7, 2014

Nighty70 thank you for your lovely comment. I'm a big fan of your POERTY

Girlygirl196349OPFullerton, California USAJun 7, 2014

Rob it's such a pleasure to recieve a compliment from you thank you !

Girlygirl196349OPFullerton, California USAJun 7, 2014

Ken ken ken you are a dear friend!, you make me smile even chuckle your a fun funny guy thanks for the lovely comment

nighty70duisburg, Nordrhein-Westfalen GermanyJun 7, 2014

Thank you nice to read thx for your compliment but i like your poems also you have so much phantasy i like that

Girlygirl196349OPFullerton, California USAJun 7, 2014

yes I do you noticed that huh I look forward to reading more from you my new friend

Joseph1112Brampton, Ontario CanadaJun 8, 2014

Hey Laura, ha love what Jessie wrote, he's not a steak , he's real? Hehe this was quite fun ta read lot of great lines, thx for sharing, J

JEANIEMACLETTERKENNY, Donegal IrelandJun 8, 2014

You getting good vibrations??
Delighted for you if you are.

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandJun 8, 2014

so happy to read this laura beautifully drawn piece dear friend

Girlygirl196349OPFullerton, California USAJun 8, 2014

Mcradloff thank you for your comment

you poor guy

I'm guessing you just like more mature women!! I'm on the immature side but I don't like gossip !! Nor do I believe we should put our hands on someone else lol have to say back in the day I did have my share of fights

Girlygirl196349OPFullerton, California USAJun 8, 2014

Martina my friend how have you been?

thank you for the lovely comments you always send they are great fully appreciated

Girlygirl196349OPFullerton, California USAJun 8, 2014

Poetnumber1 thanks for the lovely comment and the visit .

hope all is well

Girlygirl196349OPFullerton, California USAJun 8, 2014

Mr J I'm glad you liked the poem .thank you for being you!, I'm so blessed to call you my friend. Your very special to me !

Girlygirl196349OPFullerton, California USAJun 8, 2014

Jeanie Jeanie jeanie

hmmmm?. Good vibrations?

I shall plead the fith

Girlygirl196349OPFullerton, California USAJun 8, 2014

Liam thank you so much for your kind comments

orientalkoruGlenella, Queensland AustraliaJun 12, 2014

I have been away more than present in here...missed reading a lot of great writes and this definitely is top marks Laura! I love the rhythm, the lightness and the fun factors rolled into one! Awesome!

Girlygirl196349OPFullerton, California USAJun 12, 2014

O k thank you for your beautiful comment it's greatly appreciated

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USAJun 13, 2014

Hi, Girlygirl196349,
Sounds as if My Crush is pretty serious. If kissing were a crime we'd be in jail...Say you'll stay the night.. It's amazing, and hopefully wonderful, when opposites do attract. Thanks for sharing.

Girlygirl196349OPFullerton, California USAJun 13, 2014

Gnj4u thank you for the lovely comment hug:

pinklady1967rockhampton, Queensland AustraliaJun 19, 2014

I get the picture of this poem...mmmmm..but it's beautiful.. :)

Girlygirl196349OPFullerton, California USAJun 19, 2014

Pinkylady I want to thank you from the bottom of my heart for taking you time to read and comment on each of my poems!! Your a beautiful person that I would like to call my friend

thank you once again :-)

TheKey82California, USAJun 23, 2014

I absolutely love this poem, brings joy too my heart :-)

SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKSep 17, 2014

What a wonderful poem!!
(Is this the crush that turned to mush?

just askin' cuz I know you're doing fine now- and it's still a wonderful poem!)

For a long time, my motto has been:
"Opposites attract, but they're awful hard to live with..."

Much love your way, Girly!

Lyn

p.s.I'm immature, too(for my age, that is-goes w/the adhd territory in my case) - I have matured along the way, and I know you have, too, through all the hard knocks... you are very mature in lots of ways... but we're prob. both immature in our crazy, funny ways....

Rock on, sis!!!

Girlygirl196349OPFullerton, California USASep 17, 2014

Lyn thank you for your kind comment . Yes this poem was first then crush turned mush came to be . Yes it's about the we bit of a guy I dated for a bit. Thank God that's in the past

I can say I'm in a happy and much healthier relationship now much love to you!! I hope all is well with you and hubby