123whisperMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaAug 18, 2014
Very interesting point made of "blue and simply white eyes" I agree; "We all need one who lets us live with our soul made white, not blue" Beautiful write
cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAAug 18, 2014
Thank you Serp. A deep poem with many truth's. Hope to see many more of your writes. Thanks Cat.
Cafe
Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAAug 18, 2014
Beautiful poem! Thank you for shring this love.y piece
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoAug 19, 2014
A deep poem that speaks volumes. I loved the effort put into this one. Beautifully crafted piece.
wayne34liverpool, Merseyside, England UKAug 30, 2014
Exellent poem enjoyed reading this
SCatlynOPBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKAug 30, 2014
Thank you so much for that, Wayne - it is much appreciated(and your timing perfect - as I was just getting ready to go find 2 poems I need to add replies to... and here you found one of them for me! )
I love this poem myself - it wasn't written by me, but by my now husband - maybe it can help bring some comfort, just like your 'angel' poem.
All the best, SCatlyn
SCatlynOPBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKAug 30, 2014
Thank you so much for reading & commenting, Whisper - I agree with you - we all need one who lets us live...
I love your comments & poems - you're a bright light on the Poetry Corner. Thank you for visiting this one!
SCatlyn
SCatlynOPBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKAug 30, 2014
Thank you Cafe Jim! So glad you enjoyed - I will post some every so often. You know we both enjoy your poems - and it always amazes my husband that you enjoy his writing.
Cat
SCatlynOPBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKAug 30, 2014
Thank you so much, Lauragirl! You indirectly led me to rediscover this particular poem a few months ago. Appreciate you!!
Lyn
niah9Auckland, New ZealandAug 30, 2014
Nice one SCatlyn......I was talking to Jeddah yesterday.....seems the names from the past revolve without dying.....K
SCatlynOPBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKAug 30, 2014
Hi Niah K! Wow, you found Jeddah!! That's fantastic - thanks so much for stopping by - so glad you enjoyed this - and thanks for that news as well. (I'll have to get back to you on that... well, sometime-one of these days I'll be caught up )
Catlyn (remember those?lol)
SCatlynOPBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKAug 30, 2014
Thank you so much for the wonderful comment PoetNumber1 - it is greatly appreciated. So glad you stopped by!!
Comments (12)
I agree; "We all need one who lets us live
with our soul made white, not blue"
Beautiful write
many more of your writes. Thanks Cat.
Cafe
I love this poem myself - it wasn't written by me, but by my now husband - maybe it can help bring some comfort, just like your 'angel' poem.
All the best,
SCatlyn
I love your comments & poems - you're a bright light on the Poetry Corner. Thank you for visiting this one!
SCatlyn
So glad you enjoyed - I will post some every so often. You know we both enjoy your poems - and it always amazes my husband that you enjoy his writing.
Cat
Appreciate you!!
Lyn
Wow, you found Jeddah!! That's fantastic - thanks so much for stopping by - so glad you enjoyed this - and thanks for that news as well. (I'll have to get back to you on that... well, sometime-one of these days I'll be caught up )
Catlyn (remember those?lol)
SCatlyn