Belly Dance (quite the challenge)

For my working out routine
On bellydancing I am keen!
Can I swivel, can I sway?
Yes, I've got that part, okay.

'Tis my arms that need follow
or this dance shall ring too hollow.
Graceful, lithe and smooth...
I'll eventually find that groove.

I'll strive to keep at it, yes!
Working hard to do my best.
As I'm moving, I do wonder
Should my man come in from yonder
Will he glance at my dance,
will it put him in a trance?

Oh, dear, I do fear!
This distraction I did ponder,
it has made me twirl asunder.
Now in vain's my dream so dear
For I've fallen on my rear....
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Aug 2014
About this poem:
On my recent trip back from the U.S., I did manage to bring back my Bellydance workout DVD, my portable DVD player & even another voltage converter...
So this challenge is quite timely --& I've managed to get to just the start of the arm & hand movements... & the ending on this poem is fictional(I hope..)

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Girlygirl196349
teddybear I love it !, great to see you posing hug rose rose rose dancing :
SCatlyn
Aww... thank you, Girlygirl!! (I'm just chillin' from all the studying I did for the test I discovered upon my return here- and I had to pass before getting permanent visa- and I passed-Yay!)
Now I wonder - did you mean to say Posing or Posting(cause I know my dancing isn't graceful... so maybe you meant 'posing' rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing)

XO Lyn peace
purple heart
niah9
my auto check is a night mare.....and I mean Male.....those voices that echo from all directions....never be confused with Royal Mailrolling on the floor laughing
paloma66
Lovely Catlyn hope you are able to master it and hold your man in a trance.Thank you for rising to the challenge in your own sweet way.angel hug
cafetwo2010
We want belly dance!
We want belly dance!
heart beating banana heart beating
SCatlyn
Thank you so much for the comments, Niah! Oh, I just figured maile was N.Zealand speak for male anyway! rolling on the floor laughing (professor However, as you say, not to be mixed up with the Royal Mail...which I actually did do one time- well, hopefully it was only 1 time, in e-mail to an e-malee laugh)

I love living in Wales(& as I mentioned on your 'Daffodil' poem, will have to add more to this & that later. *BTW- that poem helped on the test- it asked for the name of the poet associated with a poem about daffodils...and I remembered your poem-so thanks So Much!! yay )

Also looking forward to reading & commenting on other bellydance challenges(but first I have to finish applying for permanent visa & all that jazz).

So will be back... sometime to do so. Oh, and just curious - b/c you're a pro dancer, I was wondering if you ever got into the bellydancing area?

Thanks again!!
SCat teddybear teddybear teddybear
paloma66
Just to let you know I got my PR too dear and we are very happy.All the best to you.hug
SCatlyn
Aww... thanks so much, Paloma, for your very kind comments...
and the challenge. yay (I'm a lover of poetry, but basically not a poet - however, I love challenges - they're fun, plus give me an idea of something to write about laugh ).

Also, been wanting to say, I just love your photo from an earlier time - so cute, so pretty & look like such a fun person! (Which has been noticeable all along, but that's just a delightful pic of you!)

SCatlyn rose rose rose
teddybear

p.s.I will continue to work at that bellydancing- it's beautiful & fun!
SCatlyn
Paloma!!! danceline Well, CONGRATULATIONS!!! I didn't know you were here when I posted the previous comment. laugh

That's fantastic!!! I'll have all of it soon(the process has been much easier this time around) - and then I'll be back at trying to master a little of the art of dance(I think enough at least to 'put my man in a trance' lol)

Thanks for stopping by and sharing that!! Great news!!!
XO Cat
purple heart
SCatlyn
Dear Cafe Jim,

So all those Bellydance titles caught your eye, eh?laugh

Well, guess I can't blame you. wink As far as putting on a dance(do you have a practice room in that castle for people like me- fit, fairly flexible but need to practice the finer points of the art?... actually, I suspect you are now going to adapt one of those rooms for just that purpose laugh )

Yes, go Cat go, I will - but for public viewing, I think not.

On the other hand, I think it's very hot to see a man 'get down' on the dance floor, with or without a partner, no matter his age, weight, looks - if he can move to the rhythm - it's all good(my opinion anyway).

Which leads me to address your 2nd comment-BRB

And seriously, thank you for the comments, Cafe Jim!!!

p.s.If you could add a padded area to part of the practice floor... would be much appreciated lips
darkhorse555
beautifully crafted excellent vision drawn really beautiful pieceangel wine
cafetwo2010
Yes dear. It just so happens that we're finishing up
construction at the castle which will be the Belly Dance Cafe.
We've spared no expense. The Belly Dance cafe will have
its grand opening which will consist of 12
belly dancers emerging in the midst of a colorful
water fall. All dancers welcome and may want to
post a video of their artistic style. I will be the swish,
twitch and swirl judge as I have received my move and groove
license at the local bar..oops..I mean from near and far.
So let it be written. So let it be done.
Cafe
professor
cheering
banana
yay
dancing
wow
wine
grin


grin
Poetnumber1
Nice rhyme scheme SCatlyn. Loved the witty ending, be careful you could break a hip. Enjoyed this very much.
diana_1
Oh SCatlyn, I did enjoy this one very groovy sort of belly dancing going on there nice rhyme nice rhythm and flair applause
paloma66
Dear Lyn which picture is it,to be frank I am not such a fun person just enjoy times with family,I am on the quiet side its just in my thoughts I try to be cheerful.I wish I could write on the Indian and Hawaiian dancers but my thinking process is slowing down.Thank you dear for the kind comments.You have done a good job on this poem.angel hug
wayne34
Don't worry about your dancing just go for it and watch those men drewll as you dancekiss rolling on the floor laughing
SCatlyn
Thank you so much, darkhorse! Love your comments(and your poems, too!)

SCatlyn purple heart
SCatlyn
Aha, Mr. Cafe! I thought so(and what an appropriate name, I must say laugh ).

It's very generous of you to think of us and to do this for us rolling on the floor laughing(sorry-couldn't help it grin really....rolling on the floor laughing)

...as I was saying, it's great to have such a place to go without having to be expert at it, so thank you!


professor Just to let you know - I will want to see that license if I should happen to stop by(which will happen only if I improve at my dance).

Cat

p.s.Hmmm.... I'm sure your doc knows what's behind the emotes in the line-up.... (just curious..)
Spartacus2012
Cool write SCatlyn..Thanks for your kind visits to my page!

Kenballoons
SCatlyn
Awww... thank you so much for enjoying and commenting, PoetNumber1.
Also for the thoughtful words of caution - you're so right about that thumbs up... and if that did happen, my wiggle would be out of commission for some time! rolling on the floor laughing
Thanks again for stopping by and for making me laugh as well!

SCatlyn teddybear
SCatlyn
Thanks so much for your comment, Diana! I'm so glad you enjoyed it - your Bellydance poem was awesome!
And I love how you describe the groove & rhythm - it's that rhythm/arm coordination that's gonna take me some time(don't wanna end up twirling one way while the arms go the other & end up with the hips out of commission, as Poet1 advised laugh )

Thanks for stopping by! rose rose rose

SCatlyn teddybear
SCatlyn
Hi Paloma!
Well, it's a picture in which I believe you're wearing turquoise/gold arm covers(not sure actually what the correct term would be laugh , but very decorative)... and I think it left your profile just as I was writing that comment, so am going on memory.
I did figure, that, even though you have such a cute smile in that pic, it wouldn't necessarily mean you always felt that way- and maybe not even before or after the pic was taken, cuz I've been the same way in pics from the past. But you're a very kind person, and yes, cheerful, or at least you cheer others up, that's for sure!
So it was wonderful to get a glimpse of you looking so happy, and your current pic is beautiful as well...

Wishing the very best for you, Paloma daisy
Lyn purple heart
SCatlyn
P.S.Forgot to add, thank you for your kind comments... and I thought about that very thing a few days after your challenge - that is, the Hawaiian dance. I've always been fascinated by it whenever I've seen it (don't intend to try it, mind you, but is mesmerizing).
SCatlyn
Hi Wayne! Nice to meet you wave Thanks so much for dropping in & reading - really appreciate it!!

And, well... thanks so much for the encouragement!!!yay
(Though, I'm pretty sure no one would be watching, unless I was the only one doing the dancing laugh )

Thanks again!
Catlyn teddybear
SCatlyn
Aww... thank you so much for the awesome comment, Ken! And you're very welcome!
(And I'm pretty sure you wrote a belly dance poem-if you did, I know... somehow confused that I read it- but can't remember if I commented, as I've read lots of poems I haven't gotten back to yet & am very SCatterbrained.)

professor Will go & check on that now, and
Thanks again!
SCatlyn
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