The Flowered Feet (s/c) - Dedication

Beyond the window she did see
a field of green lie silently
the blades of grass cool view
within a purple yellow sea.

Through the field barefoot she trod
as tall grass brushed her ankles there
that purple yellow quilted scene
that was the glimpse of meadow green.

The dawn had only just begun
and not long too the rising sun
as one by one the flowers yawned
and opened to another dawn.

Her feet covered by fragrance there
the purple and yellow coat
flowers so colored fair
still and bright were everywhere.

The fragrant flowers open her heart
the petals are her moving start
inviting love to blossom there
the woman with the long dark hair.

Serene and still a fragrant air
she lay upon that yellow bed
and purple haze amidst the green
and beauty thus revealed a queen.



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Ladybee42 Waterford, Waterford Ireland
Thu Jan 13, 2011 4:03 PM WET
how cool serpico - this is a lovely verse from you!
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Thu Jan 13, 2011 4:27 PM WET
thank you ladybee for those kind comments on the poem, much appreciated.. wave

niah9 Hokianga: Far North., Northland New Zealand
Thu Jan 13, 2011 9:20 PM WET
Serene...sums it up for me serpico...great write...Niah cool
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Thu Jan 13, 2011 11:25 PM WET
thank you niah for your thoughts on this poem..appreciate your additions.. wave
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Posted: Sat May 7, 2011 1:28 PM WET

About this poem:
from my serpico12 files
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REPOSTED for christian22


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Comments (15)

SCatlyn
Much love to ya, T - you're a beautiful young soul, inside and out... and as you'll see(when you get a chance to come back online), there's women on here who would've loved to have a daughter like you...

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wayne34
Lovely poem cat enjoyed readi g this stunning writeteddybear
ImagineLove
So sweet! I am lost in the visions! hug kiss purple heart
Poetnumber1
Just lovely Scatlyn. Very much enjoyed.
niah9
Oh I saw a comment of mine from the Hokianga...so far and isolated, but loved the poem still....Serene as I said then....Kteddybear
WILDANDREADY
MY HEAD IS STILL SPINNING! I'M OFF TO FLOWER MY FEET! THEY DO SO MUCH FOR ME! THEY DESERVE THE ROYAL TREATMENT!dancing
SCatlyn
Thank you so very much for that Wayne!! I find it peaceful and enjoyable, also... and it will be so very meaningful to my husband to read that you found his poem so enjoyable, as well teddybear teddybear

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SCatlyn
Thank you so much, Martina!
And you're very welcome... so glad you found the beauty and rest in it. It's what I was hoping others would find in it, as I did. teddybear hug

All the best to you,
SCatlyn purple heart
darkhorse555
beautifully penned as always cat excellent piece dear friendangel wine
SCatlyn
So glad you enjoyed it, Jadeite! Me, too - I'd just love to be in a field of flowers like that.... hug

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SCatlyn
Thank you, Poet#1! So glad you found it so and appreciate you dropping in rose rose

SCatlyn purple heart
SCatlyn
Thank you, Niah! It's so fun to see someone view along with me from the past. Wonderful comment... I had hoped it would feel that way - thanks again!

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SCatlyn
So true, WILDANDREADY! When our feet hurt, it makes everything a challenge... you keep taking care of yours... that sounds wonderful! dancing
And thank you so much for commenting!
teddybear

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tauntedhumor
Thank u ! Cat....this poem was so elegant .....this drifted me away and i very much appreciate ur support and kind love u are forever a goddess of royatly...
SCatlyn
Aww... you finally made it!! I'm so happy to see you here!!!
You're a wonderful addition to the Poetry Corner, T girl!! rose rose rose daisy daisy

And thank you once again for the wonderful comments!

Always,
Cat purple heart

p.s.Hope to see more of your poems here...hint, hint laugh
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