by SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales, UK
Sep 2014 999 Views 18 comments
hold a dream -s/c(dedication)
Carve a rainbow
in the moonlight
shed the waves
of tears for all
end the dance
of the moonbeams
early morning
begins to fall
Hold the dream
tender ocean
calm and still
you mighty sea
sink or swim
on our voyage
to the land
where time stands still...
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Posted: Mon Jun 13, 2011 4:28 PM WET
Redex Chichesters, West Sussex, England UK
Tue Jun 14, 2011 10:54 AM WET
Yes christian I still hold onto the dream what a lovely way to put it. Hope you are well, my poet friend
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Tue Jun 14, 2011 4:53 PM WET
hi redex thank you for your asking, hope you are doing well too..appreciate your comment on the poem
thesunandthesea Bangkok, Amphoe Bang Kapi Thailand
Tue Jun 14, 2011 5:26 PM WET
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh-------------!@#$%&&^%$#
Mr. DIOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OHHHHHhhhhh---- where have you been?
Have you seen my twin or Scat??? where time stands still
Nice write and beautiful... 
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Sat Jun 18, 2011 1:34 PM WET
hi thesunandthesea, this is mr dior replying to you..lol...thanks so much for your thoughts on the poem..glad you liked these...you can now link up with your twin who is back on c.s..i guess twins will have fun..
SCatlyn San Antonio, Cardiff, South Glamorgan, Wales UK
Mon Jun 20, 2011 4:28 PM WET
Wow, Mr. Dior! You're a very romantic writer. Started to quote a line...but I'd pretty much end up quoting it all. Beautiful!!
-Hi my flirty twin!! Still can't believe some think I'm the mischievous twin
So happy to find you on Mr. Dior's romantic poem... I've been here, there, and everywhere... hope to be here more, soon!
(Thanks for allowing us to meet up in the comments, Mr. Christian - your poem is - "Carve a rainbow..." fantastic!!)
vyoleta Arkaroola, South Australia Australia
Mon Jun 20, 2011 4:36 PM WET
It is so beautiful and the colour of the background just fits properly. Magnificent!
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Mon Jun 20, 2011 7:15 PM WET
hi scatlyn well thank you..i recall you did some poetry & did it well.. so you can easily i think put some in..i appreciate all your comments..and the warmth and kindness...
looks like i'm writing to the other half of the twins..you are welcome to drop in... thank you for such a rating of worth of my poem..i like to write & sometimes there is a flow...then i know it has something more...thank you twin scatlyn...
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Mon Jun 20, 2011 7:17 PM WET
hi vyoleta thank you for your value on this poem.. it means a lot when the poem has such reviews..its appreciated...
Earlgreytea Limassol, Limassol Cyprus
Sat Jun 25, 2011 4:12 PM WET
3 words, you are talented...
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Sat Jun 25, 2011 4:19 PM WET
hi earlgrey...hey thanks for that..you do pretty good yourself with your poems..
in the moonlight
shed the waves
of tears for all
end the dance
of the moonbeams
early morning
begins to fall
Hold the dream
tender ocean
calm and still
you mighty sea
sink or swim
on our voyage
to the land
where time stands still...
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Mon Jun 13, 2011 4:28 PM WET
Redex Chichesters, West Sussex, England UK
Tue Jun 14, 2011 10:54 AM WET
Yes christian I still hold onto the dream what a lovely way to put it. Hope you are well, my poet friend
Profile Deleted
Tue Jun 14, 2011 4:53 PM WET
hi redex thank you for your asking, hope you are doing well too..appreciate your comment on the poem
thesunandthesea Bangkok, Amphoe Bang Kapi Thailand
Tue Jun 14, 2011 5:26 PM WET
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh-------------!@#$%&&^%$#
Mr. DIOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OHHHHHhhhhh---- where have you been?
Have you seen my twin or Scat??? where time stands still
Nice write and beautiful... Profile Deleted
Sat Jun 18, 2011 1:34 PM WET
hi thesunandthesea, this is mr dior replying to you..lol...thanks so much for your thoughts on the poem..glad you liked these...you can now link up with your twin who is back on c.s..i guess twins will have fun..
SCatlyn San Antonio, Cardiff, South Glamorgan, Wales UK
Mon Jun 20, 2011 4:28 PM WET
Wow, Mr. Dior! You're a very romantic writer. Started to quote a line...but I'd pretty much end up quoting it all. Beautiful!!
-Hi my flirty twin!! Still can't believe some think I'm the mischievous twin
So happy to find you on Mr. Dior's romantic poem... I've been here, there, and everywhere... hope to be here more, soon!(Thanks for allowing us to meet up in the comments, Mr. Christian - your poem is - "Carve a rainbow..." fantastic!!)
vyoleta Arkaroola, South Australia Australia
Mon Jun 20, 2011 4:36 PM WET
It is so beautiful and the colour of the background just fits properly. Magnificent!
Profile Deleted
Mon Jun 20, 2011 7:15 PM WET
hi scatlyn well thank you..i recall you did some poetry & did it well.. so you can easily i think put some in..i appreciate all your comments..and the warmth and kindness...
looks like i'm writing to the other half of the twins..you are welcome to drop in... thank you for such a rating of worth of my poem..i like to write & sometimes there is a flow...then i know it has something more...thank you twin scatlyn...Profile Deleted
Mon Jun 20, 2011 7:17 PM WET
hi vyoleta thank you for your value on this poem.. it means a lot when the poem has such reviews..its appreciated...
Earlgreytea Limassol, Limassol Cyprus
Sat Jun 25, 2011 4:12 PM WET
3 words, you are talented...
Profile Deleted
Sat Jun 25, 2011 4:19 PM WET
hi earlgrey...hey thanks for that..you do pretty good yourself with your poems..
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Posted: Sep 2014
About this poem:
For ImagineLove - an early b-day present- my triple-double twin-lol xox
(Actual b-day OCT.8)
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Comments (18)
In the middle of trying to make all the letters fit in the above... there you were writing something beautiful for me... out of love
Love you, Jade... and happy early birthday!!
You're gifted... and a gift!
Always,
Cat
From your Cat-o'mine
Ken
Thank you Catlyn. nice poem.n
I love moonlight. but then, who does not???
Cat
So glad you dropped by!
Cat
Cat that's not working
I did it! I just didn't read the instruction thoroughly, my bad! I sometimes hurry...anyway this is for you! and Everyone really too!
fri 10 October 2014 22.41 AM
And I always love when the words are on a video, as it usually turns out I've missed some, even if I've known the song for years... and most definitely on this song.
Wow, I've heard this one for years, but only really knew the melody, not the words except 'lose' and 'moonshadow'(I guess b/c all those years I heard it I was untreated ADHD- I even read of a woman who lived in the same house for 50 years, finally noticed trees nearby that she had overlooked until she received what she needed for her ADHD).
Now I know why, when I looked out the window, it was so dark on the full moon, and then the next night it was so bright(I even took a pic of it that next night)
Well, I'm gonna leap and hop- yes I am!! Cuz I can... and I don't care if anyone thinks I'm crazy- and I will as long as I have legs... and well, it's just a fantastic song, Jadess! Thank you for the gift!!!
...the gift of yourself and this song
Love you, Jade
Cat
p.s.(it was the 's', wasn't it...)
Nice to meet you
Thank you so very much for the comment - very happy to know you enjoyed it!
(and while I reposted it, the poem was actually written by my husband- before he was my husband... and how I came to discover & love Poetry Corner).
Thanks again!!
(I think I may have seen some poems by you the other day that I wanted to comment on, but didn't have a chance- will go check & comment- only have time for 1 right now... but think there were more... and I'll eventually get to them, too... and yours too, Wayne, and... lots of others
Cat
And as you say, writing something for our Jadess is a no-brainer.
Thanks for contributing to this celebration of her birthday!!!
Cat
Glad you enjoyed it, and thank you so very much for dropping by with the lovely comment! It's truly appreciated!
Cat