A Hero (s/c)

Medals are for heroes
commendations for the brave,
courage and devotion
bravery, sacrifice,
flow in their veins.

We celebrate and honour
those who carry
such a life,
giving and unequalled
price often the life.

One man saw a need
stepped into the fray,
his life was exchanged
so we could slip away
he stood alone for us.

Blood was spilt
life was taken
we could escape.
Where is his medal ribbon
never had one

He died for people
to save them so....
Jesus was his name
a substitute who came

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Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 3:20 PM WET



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SCatlyn San Antonio, Cardiff, South Glamorgan, Wales UK
Sat Jun 18, 2011 4:22 AM WET
Now this is beautiful. Lovely poem, Christian purple heart gift

thesunandthesea Bangkok, Amphoe Bang Kapi Thailand
Sat Jun 18, 2011 5:29 AM WET
THANK YOU MR. CHRISTIAN ^_______________^
Not only for writing or sharing this poem, but also for taking someone back to me.lol grin
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Redex Chichesters, West Sussex, England UK
Sat Jun 18, 2011 10:15 AM WET
Christian i am not religious but this poem without last two lines for me could stand for a lot of people down the ages.

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Sat Jun 18, 2011 1:27 PM WET
hi scatlyn why thank you so much for lifting one up, it's something i think is so true, and it's so nice to see you like it and appreciate it..here' s to the best hero of all...thanks so much..

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Sat Jun 18, 2011 1:28 PM WET
hi thesunandsea, thank you, been a while since i have replied to your poems, and scatlyn i see is back..your twin is on the air waves again..lol
thanks for commenting on this poem..i appreciate it and hope it was good reading..

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Sat Jun 18, 2011 1:30 PM WET
hi redex, thank you ..it was so nice of you to reply on this, as christians mostly do, and they are welcome, as are your nice comments, about the last two lines, christian or not..i hope you are well and really appreciate the time you took...
Redex Chichesters, West Sussex, England UK
Sat Jun 18, 2011 7:46 PM WET
thankyou christian am glad you took it as it was meant I just thought it suited loads of heros, as all your poems do suit for all teddybear
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Sat Jun 18, 2011 11:17 PM WET
thank you redex for the added comments. i always appreciate the fact you comment, and your work too is very good and has style.
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Comments (15)

diana_1
very well said, very well done... I love this.
bungallow55
WoW you got me there, till I read last verse
this can't be said better
I wish I can, but I can't, write comments like
you do...only this...Great.wine wine
gnj4u
Hi, SCatlyn,
One man saw a need stepped into the fray... All it takes is One to step in to make life better for others. Thank you for sharing christian22's poem A Hero that reminds us to be thankful for the sacrifices made for each of us.
Spartacus2012
Wonderful Christian tribute..Thanks for the share..

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Jaybri4u
Hello Catlyn;
Its a very painful thing not to be rewarded
recognized, or acknowledged.
Jesus saved humanity.
Lets reward our hero Jesus by believing
in him, repenting and asking for forgivenes.

Thank you the true reflection.
Blessings to you.

J
WILDANDREADY
CAT, AND YOUR EXTREMELY TALENTED OTHER! I HAVE TO STAND UP AND APPLAUDE, THIS ONE!yay
SCatlyn
Thank you, Diana - your comment is so appreciated... and I already miss you! teddybear

Cat purple heart
niah9
as I have said before, your hubby has a way of cutting through thought with positive words....great write, worthy of reposting...Kathyteddybear
tauntedhumor
AMEN preach our loyalty for jesus what a wonderul piece
morgen90210
hi Cat and as a servant of Jesus Christ the Son of God of Israel. ..
I rejoice with you!!!
thank you for sharing

lately ive got a very important poem to write
based on HIM from 2 different viewpoint
unlike night and day is totally opposite ...
to embrace is in fact condemnation
to our faith and the very foundation
it is built upon and is the absolute truth
from the deceiving paramount lie...
Jesus of Nazareth is NOT the prophet Jesus of the Muslim!!!
SCatlyn
Hi Joy,

That's profound but true, likely more than most of us realize. Though I think we realize even more now, as so recently highlighted through our loss of our beautiful poet soul Cafe Jim, including through the words of those who've written tributes, that a msg., comment or flower, I'm sure at times made a very great impact on the receiver without him beginning to know just how great it really was. I'm sure in his lifetime, he'd learned the impact even the smallest gesture could have, and likely why he did so much more behind the scenes than I'd realized - not in the bigness of a particular gesture, but in the sincere content & the sheer volume of individuals he cheered on, beyond his great rapport in his public comments. I do feel along the way, he did begin to realize how much it meant to so many, though I think it never ceased to amaze him how much his poetry was enjoyed here; and he thoroughly appreciated that, and the fact that through his writing he could touch others in very significant ways.

I learned from a child in my church, at a time when my own child was very young, that even a 4 yr. old(to whom I was a Sunday School teacher) could do so, as she was the only one in my entire day that year, who came up to me during class, and hugged me & told me "Happy Mother's Day". It was wonderful, and I'll never forget the impact a few simple words can make. It completely changed the rest of my day.

And it happens on a big scale, as well, as you pointed out in your comments. One person certainly can make a difference, even change history, for the better.

Thank you, Joy, for the positive difference you've made through your poems(which some day, I'm going to delve into more fully), along with the wonderful encouraging comments you also leave here, and many other ways I believe you've encouraged & helped others throughout the years you've been among us here.

Cat


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SCatlyn
Thank you for your wonderful comment, Ken!
It's very appreciated and means so much. rose rose
Cat
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SCatlyn
Hi there Jaybri,

Thank you so very much for your comment. An astute observation, as well, I'm so glad you brought out, as I think I also needed to be reminded, "...a very painful thing not to be rewarded
recognized, or acknowledged."

I also agree wholeheartedly with the rest of your comment; I'm sorry I wasn't here to let you know that(maybe you'll be back sometime, or at least peek in once in a while). Though I remember you, mainly from 2014, I do remember you wrote some wonderful poetry.

Sincerely,
Cat rose rose rose
SCatlyn
W&R Travis!! So glad to find you here. Thank you for that outstanding(not to mention upstanding) comment - I say that in all seriousness. You're applauding of this write is so very appreciated. Wishing you all the best in your various pursuits, including taking care of the cats that come into your life. thanks hug

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rapturecapture
Hi cat

A Hero is a great title for this lovely poem!heart wings


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